【英语四级作文点评模板高中】大学英语四级大纲写作：Is Failure a Bad Thing？

Is Failure a Bad Thing？

Directions : for this part，you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic 3360 is failure a bad thing？you should write at least 120 words and you should base your composition on the outline(given in Chinese)below 3360

1.失败是常有的事。

人们对失败持不同的态度。

我对失败的态度。

remember to write your composition neatly。

[范文]

Is Failure a Bad Thing？

failure is a common thing in our daily life . as students，we some times fail toget high scores in our examination . when we play games，Wecanall these failures happen naturally all

霍华德，There are different attitudes towards failure . some people lose heartin failure . they think the world is at its end when they fail . some Ot tame

In my opinion、what really countsis not failure itself、But what we think of failure And do after failure . as long aswe don ' t give up as

[注释]

fail to:没有。做。失败

白求恩：被打败了

lose heart:失去信心

learn much from failure:从失败中吸取很多教训

in my opinion:我认为

数量：重要；有意义。有价值

as long as:韩

in the meantime:同时

succeed in:成功

[评论]

这是根据汉语大纲展开的议论文。文章首先指出失败是学习中、体育比赛中、工作中等常见的事情。第二段指出了对失败的两种相反的看法。也就是说，一个人因此失去信心，无法自拔。另一个人坦然接受这个现实，从失败中吸取教训。第三段由In my opinion带领整个段落，比较详细地讲述了作者本人的观点。在这一段中，作者说：我们一方面不要害怕失败，另一方面也要避免失败。万一失败了，就要从失败中吸取教训，更好地指导今后的工作生活。全文以谚语结束，看起来生动活泼。

参考文献：英语作文高分必须背丛书：《大学英语四级作文/梨花传》主编，武汉大学出版社，2005年。