【学生玩游戏的利与弊英语作文初中】朋友圈疯狂满分英语作文Computergamesandoureyesight

一篇题为《Computer games and our eyesight》的期中考试满分英语作文在家长们的朋友圈中迅速传播开来。下面是这篇满分作文，你觉得元芳怎么样？

写作主题和要求：

write at least 60 words according to the given topic " computer games and our eyesight "

学生作文：

Computer games and our eyesight

how do students like playing computer games in your class？

is it good or bad for eyesight if they spend much time in the computer room？Why？

would you give your kind advice to them？

two-thirds of male students in our class like playing computer games very much。

though our teachers and their parents told them not to play games any more again and again。

I think it is bad for eyesight if they spend much time in the computer room。

be cause I have some experience by my self . I used to play them . then I had to put on my glasses .

so I advise you . give it up as soon as possible。

原文翻译：

how do students like playing computer games in your class？

你们班学生玩电脑的情况怎么样？

is it good or bad for eyesight if they spend much time in the computer room？Why？

如果他们在电脑室花费太多时间，对视力是好是坏？

would you give your kind advice to them？

你能给他们一些建议吗？

two-thirds of male students in our class like playing computer games very much。

我们班三分之二的男生非常喜欢玩电脑游戏。

though our teachers and their parents told them not to play games any more again and again。

虽然我的老师和父母一次又一次地告诉他们不要再玩游戏了。

I think it is bad for eyesight if they spend much time in the computer room。

我认为他们在电脑室呆太久会影响他们的视力。

because I have some experience by my self . I used to play them。

因为我已经从自己的经验中获得了一些经验。我以前经常玩游戏。

Then I had to put on my glasses .

然后我戴上眼镜。

so I advise you . give it up as soon as possible。

因此，我建议你尽快停止这种做法。

作文鉴赏：

这篇文章作者可以从自己的角度思考问题，意识到玩电脑游戏对自己的眼睛有严重伤害，可以呼吁其他学生尽快放弃玩长期游戏的坏习惯。文章流畅，措辞恰当。

那么这篇文章为什么能在家长的朋友圈上疯狂传播呢？

大概引起了很多父母的共识吧？

如果你是父母，你觉得这篇作文怎么样？

为什么少尉当时没有这么高的觉悟？

50米外不分你我，

百米外的人和牲口不分……。

眼睛是心灵的窗户。所以小伟呼吁童鞋们。

要适当使用电脑、手机等电子设备。

避免引起近视，给以后的生活带来各种不便。