【中国宇航员英文作文初中】中考英语写作训练指导——人物介绍

写作任务

杨利伟是中国进入太空的第一人，是中国人的骄傲。请根据以下信息，以Our National Hero-Yang Liwei为题，写一篇介绍这位宇宙英雄的短文。

提示内容：

1.1965年6月21日出生在辽宁省，小时候梦想飞向天空。

2.18岁进入大学，4年后成为飞行员(Pilot)。

1998年成为宇航员。

4.2003年乘坐神舟五号进入太空。

要求：

1.短文应包括以上提示内容，并能适当发挥。

字数：约80。

写作思路与分析

这次写作任务要求写一篇介绍杨利伟的短文。写人物介绍类记叙文时，我们要注意以下事项。

1.我来介绍一下这个人物的下一个情况。

个人情况(出生日期、出生地、外貌、性格、家庭背景等)；

成长足迹、教育经验、主要成就等。

对人物的评价。

2.人称：一般使用第三人称。

3.时态：介绍外貌、性格和观点时通常使用现在，但介绍过去的经验时通常要使用过去。

具体到本习作，可以按照以下结构使用。

词汇储备

外貌说明：small mouth、big eyes、round face、large nose、long curly hair、short straight hair、tall and thin和of medium

性质或品质说明：careful、hard-working、kind、helpful、friendly、outgoing、smart、clever、nice、brave

表示pro:pilot、astronaut、teacher、driver、policeman、police woman、clerk、doctor、farmer、worker、

句型聚集

开始：

1 .is very famous as a.in the world .

2.in China，there is a famous.called.

3 .is one of the most successful.in.

4.maybe your hero is a famous singer，a movie star or a great man。but my hero seems quite common .

5.do you know the famous.I ' d like to tell you something about him。

主体：

1 .was born in.on.

2 .was born into a rich family .

3.when he was a small boy/young，he was good at/interested in.

4.during his childhood，he lived a happy/hard life。

5.he graduated from.high school/university .

6.he began to study in.at the age of.

7.he became a teacher/scientist/an actor.when he was.years old .

8.although he.he has a very strong will。

9.where there is a will、there is a way。

10.every one regards him as.

11.He has a heart of gold。

12.whatever he does、he never gives up easily。

13.his hard work brought him great success。

14.his success made a big difference to our life。

15.he is such a nice/friendly/an outgoing/.

That we all love him。

结束：

1.he has set a very good example for all of us to follow。

2.He's simply the best in my heart！

3.he is the pride of China . we should learn from him。

4.I learn from him that we should never give up，no matter what difficulties we face .

5.wecan make our dreams come true if wework hard like him。

范文展览

Our national hero

-杨利伟

杨利伟is one of the greatest astronauts in China。杨华远《Liaoning on June 21st》，1965年。when he was young，His dream was to fly into the sky like a bird . at the age of 18，yang entered university . four years la ter，His dream came TM

杨利伟is the first person to travel into space in China。being hard-working and brave，he is a true hero。we Chinese people ale