【大学英语四第四单元作文】《大学英语四级大纲写作》The Heavy Bags of School Children

the heavy bags of school children

directions : for this part、you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition entitled the heavy

bags of school children in 3 paragraphs . you should base your composition on the

Following Outline(Given In Chinese)。write no less than 120 words。

1.现在学生们的书包越来越重了。

沉重的书包造成的缺点；

3.你的几条建议。

[范文]

The Heavy Bags of School Children

have you noticed that the students ' bags are growing heavier and heavier，including not only those of the middle-school children but all whavierIn addition to the textbooks，There are various kinds of reference booksand exercise books bought either by The teachers or by their parents . ee

will the ' heavy bags ' and homework help them learn better？it is right that ' practice makes perfect "，Yet there should be A limit . too much pressure may lead to the opposite effect . every one ' s enee

we all know that ' all work and no play makes jack a dull boy '。I hope that all the teachers and parents could understand the children and give the E free time to enjoy what their ages endowthem with。

[注释]

参考手册：参考书

amuse:让人幸福。

声学subjects:系

授予endow:

[评论]

这是根据汉语大纲写的议论文。

本文第一段从两个问题文开始，扪心自问，逐渐引出核心论断：What a heavy burden the children are bearing！中间段落还以提问文为开头，逐渐阐明了沉重的书包和课业压力造成的诸多弊端。在结尾段落中，作者提出了建议，希望教师和家长能给孩子更多自由支配的时间。

这篇论文根据题目指南的要求分为三个自然段落，按照“解决问题——分析问题3354”的想法展开，结构看起来非常明确。多次使用问题，确实引起了读者的注意。引用“practice makes perfect”和“all work and no play makes jack a dull boy”有助于议程并增加文采。

以上就是这篇范文的成功。

资料来源：李华传主编《四级写作》，新大英语4、6考点透视丛书/李华传主编，武汉大学出版社，2006年。