【在街道拐角处初中英语作文】准备2018年期中考试英语书面表达万能模板的文章型记叙文。

准备2018年期中考试英语书面表达万能模板的文章型记叙文。

[写作框架]

[模板范文]

yesterday our class had a basketball match with cla two was the top team of our grade，but we didn ' twant to settle for second best .

The match began at 4:30.at first，class two played better and was always in the lead . we were standing around the court，Cheering loudly firstour class won the match。

the exciting match gave us a lot of fun。

[写作注意事项]

记叙文是以人和报道为主要内容的文体。其中包括时间、地点、人物、事件原因、经过和结果(例如when、where、who、why、how和what)的六个要素。写叙述类文章时要明确说明这六大要素，同时要注意以下三点。

(1)叙述方式：主要有顺序、历书、插叙三种，英语记叙文主要以顺序注为主。

(2)时态上：记叙文主要描述过去发生的事情，因此通常使用过去、过去、过去、过去、未来等时态。

(3)人称奖：多使用第一人称和第三人称。用第一人称表达是叙述者亲身经历的事情。以第三人称，通过作者和读者以外的第三方，将故事的具体情节展现在读者面前。

[写作方法]

第1款：开门见山地说明事件的一般情况(如时间、地点、人物、事件等)。

第2段：详细说明事件发展的过程、原因、结果等。

第3段：评价这个事件：表达自己的观点、感情等。

[常用表达]

写好叙事类文章开头的四种方法

1.“单刀直入”式的开始

一般来说，文章开头要尽可能以“开门见山”开始。也就是说，要用简单明了的语言引起句子话题，使文章说明的内容从一开始就能理解。

可以从一开始就解释清楚叙事类的文章、人物、时间、事件、环境。例如，“A Trip to Huangshan”可以从last month、my family went to Huangshan by train . it took us ten hours to get there开始，We were tired but the bet there。

2.回忆的开始

在描述事件或游记的文章中，采用回忆性的开头往往引人注目。这种类型的开头通常包含描述自己心情或感情的词。I will Never forget my first trip to Huangshan，包括never forget、remember、unforgettable、exciting和surprising。或it was really an unforgettable experience I had。

3.可疑的开始

可以从叙事类或论述性文章中的疑问型开始，容易引起阅览者的注意，抓住中心。比如“Planting”

Trees(种树)＂的开头可以是：Have you ever planted trees? Don’t you think planting trees is ... 再如＂Traveling Abroad(出国之旅)＂的开头可以是：If you have an opportunity to travel abroad, why not consider Singapore?

4. 倒叙式开头

在有的文章，特别是叙事类的文章中，可以采用倒叙的写作手法，先写出事件的结果，再陈述过程。如＂Catching Thieves (捉贼)＂的开头可以这样写：I lay in bed in the hospital. I smiled at my friends even though my legs hurt. Do you want to know what happened to me? Let me tell you. It’s a ... story.

【亮点句型】

1. Among various kinds of things/persons in my mind, ...is the most unforgettable one．

2. On a sunny/rainy morning， while I was...First of all... Then...　After that... In the end...

3. He/she/this was one of the most meaningful/enjoyable/unforgettable persons/things that I have ever met / experienced, I will remember him/in forever．

加分句子：

1. Sth. impressed me greatly...

2. What impressed me most is that...

经典句型：

1. Last Sunday（Saturday...）, it was sunny（rainy, windy, foggy）

2. I got up very early （late）. After breakfast I went to with my friends by bike, bus...

3. We enjoyed ourselves.

4. We forgot the time. We didn’t come back until 5 o’clock.

5. We all felt very tired, but we were happy.

6. I thought I would never forget this trip.

7. Last summer, my parents and

I went to Beijing for our holidays.

8. We visited a lot of places of interest.

9. We had a good time there.

10. We bought a lot of things. The clothes here are good and cheap.

【必背范文】

假设你叫李华，昨天晚上你看完电影在回家途中目击了一起抢劫案．请就以下信息，以李华的名义写一份给警方的书面材料，要求词数100左右．材料的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数．

案发时间	昨天晚上大约九点
案发地点	电影院附近的一条街道拐角处
作案人情况	两个男子，一个戴着墨镜的高个子，一个矮个子
受害人情况	一位年轻的女士，戴着一条金项链和一块金手表
案发经过	你正在街道上走着，突然听到身后有人呼救．你看到两个男子正抢劫一名女子，女子和他们进行了激烈的搏斗．当你赶到时，两个劫匪已各自骑着自行车逃跑．女子的金表被抢走了，但幸运的是女子没有受伤．

Dear Sir/Madam,

I’m writing to report a robbery to you．________________________________________________________

________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

I hope the information will help you catch the robbers．

Yours faithfully

Li Hua．

【思路分析】

本文属于材料作文，为警察提供一份目击证明。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。

【范文赏析】

Dear Sir/Madam,

I’m writing to report a robbery to you. At about nine last night, I was on the way back home from the cinema when suddenly I heard someone crying for help from behind. I turned around and found a tall man with a pair of dark glasses and a short man robbing a young woman at the street corner near the cinema. The woman wore a gold necklace and a gold watch. She put up a good fight with them. I ran towards them but when I arrived, the two robbers had ridden their bikes away. They robbed the woman of her gold watch, but luckily, the woman wasn’t hurt.

I hope the information will help you catch the robbers.

Yours faithfully,

Li Hua

【写作亮点】

这是一篇优秀的作文，很好地完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，时态运用准确、主谓一致，特别是使用了一些亮点词句，如on the way，suddenly，cry for help，turned around，put up，ran towards以及luckily等，增强了文章的逻辑关系，上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯，是一篇优秀的范文。

备战2018年中考英语书面表达万能模板之写人型记叙文