【小学英语作文网】第4级大纲写作：Make Our Cities Greener

Make Our Cities Greener

Directions: For this part，You are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic : make Our cities greener . You should write at lee

1.城市绿化现状；

2.城市绿化的好处(如空气清洁、城市美化、气候改善等)；

怎么样才能实现城市绿化？

remember to write your composition neatly。

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Make Our Cities Greener

In recent years，Many trees and flowers have been planted in and around all the cities of China . some cities have already changed their faces . theythere are fewer trees along the streets，let alone lawns 1。we are facing a great task to make our city

it is very important to make our cities greener . trees and flowers are beneficial to our health because They absorb carbon-dioxideand product They

How can we make our cities greener？First，We should plant more trees and flowers . besides，We should carefully look after the planted trees and flowers . no one should be allower

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lawn:草

carbon-dioxide:二氧化碳

微克莱恩：当地气候；小型气候

beautify:美化

tread:踩；踩

pluck:折叠

嘉德宁：园艺产业

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这篇文章是根据汉语大纲展开的议论文。

全文团结开展名为“城市绿化”的中心。在第一段中，作者根据大纲第一点的提示指出我国目前的绿化现状令人担忧，得出了我们面临绿化这一严重问题的结论。在第二段中，作者根据大纲的第二个提示，从气候环境和城市美化两个方面论述了绿化的好处。在这一段中，作者使用also、In addition等连接词，自然地转换语句。在第三段中，作者从问题开始，用First、Besides、Of course等词逐步回答。最后，我们谈谈我国的基本政策。这些都是实现城市绿化和美化房子的阶段。

纵观全文，语言流畅，转换自然。论点正确，论据有理，论证有力。

参考文献：英语作文高分必须背丛书：《大学英语四级作文/梨花传》主编，武汉大学出版社，2005年。