【环境水污染作文英语初中】CET-6大纲写作《City's Pollution》

[CET-6概述写作]The City's Pollution Problem

Directions : for this part，you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic given below according to the following outline.

The City's Pollution Problem

1.Problems and their causes

2.Measures taken

3.The need of greater efforts

[范文]

The City's Pollution Problem

for many years the problem of pollution in big cities has been growing . most of this pollution is the result of a growing population . more peops Meant momon

Now、however、people have realized the seriousness of this problem and they are starting to correct it . first、Many new laws have passed

in the future an even greater effort is needed to deal with the pollution problem . more controls on industrial pollution will clean up both the rive Anddoing this would ensurepeople a healthier and happies

[注释]

pollutants:污染物

:版排放

水处理设备water treatment facilities:

正在实施的effect :

实施enforced:

ensure:保证

[简评]

这是根据英语大纲提示展开的议论文。首先要求考生根据大纲确定专业中心思想，然后文章围绕中心思想展开。

第一段供认了多年来城市污染问题日益严重的事实。然后列举这种情况的各种原因。第二段，人们已经认识到这个问题的严重性，正在开始纠正这个问题。第一，通过很多新法律控制工厂排污量。第二，家人用煤气代替煤炭做饭。此外，新的水处理设备为人们提供了更干净的水。最后一段指出，我们仍然需要进一步努力解决污染问题。

正文中心突出，主题明确。连接词besides、first、second、in addition等的合理使用使全文一致，形成有机整体。

资料来源：新大学英语四、六级考点透视丛书：六级作文/李华传主编，武汉大学出版社，2006年。