提到英语作文，很多同学写不了笔，总是“信手拈来”，没有计划。这样做的结果是，作文章节结构不明确，内容选择离题，会影响作文的整体分数。为了帮助大家解决这个难题，小简老师带来了英语写作思维导图，让大家以后可以写作文，下次可以稳拿满分。(大卫亚设)。
1
写文章时要考虑哪些方面的因素？
(1)本主题所需的词汇、短语。
(2)本课题的写作模板结构等。
(3)与该主题相关的经典名句、谚语等。
2
困惑与对策
困惑1:写什么？
想以《How to learn well?》为题写一篇作文，该怎么开始？看下面几张思维导图有助于整理一篇作文的写作框架。
困惑2:如何选择材料？
虽然知道写作框架，但在完善框架时，还会出现另一个困惑。如何选择材料？以下是一些关于写作选择的建议。
1.选择英语思维导图各地区所需的词汇块和积木。
2.把各地区的词块和短语逐段用连贯的语篇写出来。
3.对照思维导图进行自我校正，注意人称时态语气、句型结构的正确使用。
困惑3:怎么表达？
很多学生写文章时使用的句子比较单一，所以文章大部分都差不多，个性不足。为了解决这些问题，可以从以下方面进行改进：
1.对于同样的意思，注意不同句子的表达方法，选择更好的句子。
2.写短文，表达有力，生动，丰富，努力避免重复使用同一个句子。
3.请特别注意使用升腾的单词和句子。
3
思维导图在英语写作中的应用实例
写入过程：
1.检讨问题，整理想法：考虑写什么。
2.单词选择：根据话题和作文框架选择所需的语料(词块和词块)。
3.派词造句：根据思维导图的语料，以适当的句型写作。
4.最后确定语篇：根据思维导图修改润色作文——，一定要符合主题，表达准确，自然，语篇流畅。
示例1:
如果你参加上周二学校组织的英语演讲比赛，有两位同学——芳芳和明，他们的不同表现会给你留下深刻印象。大卫亚设，Northern Exposure(美国电视)请根据下表的内容写一篇英语短文。
芳芳
很明显
我
1.认为自己英语说得好，所以不需要努力。花时间挑选比赛用的漂亮衣服
2.因为准备不足，所以太紧张了，没能结束演讲。
1.努力学习，向别人请教。比赛前两天伤了腿，但没有放弃
2.在比赛中做得很好
一定要学
参考词汇：英语演讲比赛英语语音内容
要求：
1.字数：80到100个
2.短文的开头已经给出，不包括单词总数
要点齐全，文章连贯，可以适当发挥
last Tuesday Fangfang and mingming entered the English speech co
ntest in our school. What they did make me think deeply.Before the contest, Fangfang thought__________________.
范文1
Last Tuesday Fangfang and Mingming entered the English Speech Contest in our school. What they did make me think deeply.
Before the contest, Fangfang thought her English was the best. So shespent lots of time picking some beautiful clothes for herself instead of trying to work hard at English for the contest. As a result, she didn t do well in the contest because she hadn t got ready for the contest.
But Mingming was different from Fangfang. He worked hard at Englishand asked others for help. Especially, his leg was hurt two days before the contest, but he never gave up. In the end, he won the contest.
No doubt, from Mingming we should learn : No pains, No gains. From now on, I mush learn fromMingming.
范文2
Last Tuesday Fangfang and Mingming entered the English Speech Contest in our school. What they did make me think deeply.
Before the contest, Fangfang thought she was good at English, and that she didn t need to spend more time on the contest at all. She alwaysconsidered picking some beautiful clothes for the contest. But Mingming was different. He worked hard at English and asked others for help. Though he had hurt his leg two days before the contest, he never gave up.
In the end, Fangfang didn t get ready well enough. At the contest, she was so nervous that she she failed. But Mingming won because of his efforts.
In my opinion, we should learn from Mingming: Work hard and make progress every day.
范文3
Last Tuesday Fangfang and Mingming entered the English Speech Contest in our school. What they did make me think deeply.
Before the contest, Fangfang thought that she was good at English. So it wasn t necessary to spend lots of time preparing for the contest. What she only thought was what clothes should wear, which make herself more beautiful at the contest. At last, she was too nervous to finish the contestbecause she didn t get ready very well.
Instead, Mingming had been working at English and asking others for help. What s more, he had hurt his leg two days before the contest. But he had never given up. As the result, he won the contest.
I think we should learn from Mingming: Work hard and never give up.
►实例2：
生活是丰富多彩的，没有爱好的人生是不完整的人生。亲爱的同学，在生活中，你有什么兴趣爱好吗？这个兴趣爱好是怎样培养起来的？它给你的生活增添了哪些色彩？请你以 “My Hobby”为题，结合自己的亲身经历写一篇短文。（词数80个左右）
要求：
1.语句通顺，合乎逻辑，书写规范。
2.文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称。
范文1
Reading is my hobby. When I was seven years old, one day, I read a comic book about how a girl beat a wolf. I was moved deeply by the girl.From then on I became interested in reading books.
Reading can not only kill the time, but also, more importantly, help improve my skills. And books can teach me how to be a good person. Books can also solve many problems for me.
In a word, reading books can make my life colorful. I will read more good books to improve myself in the future.
范文2
My favourite hobby is watching movies in the cinema. Three years ago, while I was watching the adventure 3D film Avatar in the cinema, I was attracted by the beautiful sights. It was so creative that it made me enjoy a lot. From then on, I became a movie fan.
Now, when I am tired, I go to the cinema. When I am happy, I go to the cinema, too. On the one hand, movies can make me relaxed. On the other hand, I can learn lots of knowledge from movies.
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