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题型解析
作文题的提示形式包括提纲、情景、图画或图表等,每次考试采用其中一种形式。要求考生根据所规定的题目及所给出的提示写出一篇短文。四级作文的长度不少于120词,六级作文的长度不少于150词。
评分标准
四级和六级的作文评分均采用总体印象评分方式。作文满分为15分,分为五个档次:
目前你属于哪个得分档?
我们的目标是第一个档!
高分技巧
一篇高分作文是怎样炼成的?
在阅卷过程中,阅卷老师一般先根据作文结构给出基本分,然后根据用词和句式方面的好坏进行加减分。星火英语原创写作简方法——「三维构建写作法」,参照阅卷老师思路从结构、用词、句式三个维度来构建和修改作文。
一、写作结构
首段怎么写
好的开头是高分作文必不可少的要素,是吸引阅卷老师注意的关键。通过分析近十年的四六级高分作文,我们归纳出了四六级作文首段常用的写作方法。具体如下:
▌现象阐释法
现象阐释法指的是直接就题目进行简单描述,给出自己的理解。这是现象解释型和问题解决型作文最常用的一种方法。可以这样写:
Recently, the rise in the problem of ______ has aroused public/wide concern. 近来, ______问题的增加已经引起了公众/广泛的关注。
▌观点引入法
引入法是观点论证型作文常用的一种方法。该方法开门见山地提出主题,并逐渐引出个人观点。可以这样写:
“______” is a proverb full of logic, which has been generally accepted. “______”是一个非常有道理的谚语,被人们普遍接受。
▌问题引入法
问题引入法是观点论证型和现象解释型作文最常用的一种方法。本方法以问句开篇,更引人入胜。可以这样写:
We are often shown/told these days that ______. But is this really the case?近来我们经常听说______。但情况真的如此吗?
中间段怎么写
一般来讲,真正决定作文表达效果的还是中间段。为了紧扣题意,增强表达效果,中间段的写作可采用以下三种方法:
▌列举法
列举法是四级写作中常用的方法,一般用first, second等一系列标志词引出原因或者可能的影响等。可以这样写:
There may be a combination of factors which contribute to/are responsible for/can explain ______. 也许有一些因素造成/可以解释______。
▌对比法
对比法是指通过对比两种截然不同的观点来陈述其中的利弊,从而得出自己的结论。可以这样写:
The advantages gained in ______ outweigh/are much greater than the advantages we gain from ______. 从______中获取的优势远远超过我们从______中获取的。
▌举例法
所谓举例法,是指以恰当的事例来佐证自己的观点,例子应该典型、精炼。可以这样写:
From my everyday experience and observation I can list several examples that defend the statement that ______. 根据我的日常经验和观察,我可以举出几个例子来证明______。
末段怎么写
末段一般是总结全文,照应题目,点明主旨,深化中心。简洁、有力的末段可以为文章锦上添花。末段的写作可尝试使用以下四种方法:
▌归纳总结法
归纳总结法指的是以文章前面的论述为依据,引出或重申文章的中心思想或结论。可以这样写:
To sum up, ______can benefit us tremendously if correctly used.
总而言之,如果运用得当,______会让我们受益匪浅。
▌名言引用法
名言引用法是指引用古今中外名人的名言警句来证明论点。可以这样写:
The saying ______ has been widely accepted throughout the world. 名言______在世界范围内被普遍接受。
▌提出建议法
提出建议法是指对所讨论的问题提出建设性的意见或者解决问题的具体方法。可以这样写:
It might be time to hear the warnings of some economists.该是听听一些经济学家的警告的时候了。
▌预测展望法
预测展望法是指预测某一现象的发展趋势或某一措施的深远影响。可以这样写:
The significance of ______cannot be overvalued. ______的意义重大。
二、写作用词
单词和短语是文章最基本的组成单位,用词是否出彩在一定程度上决定了文章是否能得高分!要想用对词,必须遵循以下原则:
无重复原则
英语写作中经常会出现在同一文章中反复使用同一个词、词组的情况,这就是我们通常所说的重复。用词重复主要表现在名词、动词、形容词等实词的重复上。例如:
为避免用词的重复,可采用以下方法:
省略
省略是避免重复最主要的手段。它可以节省词语,使句子结构更紧凑,还可以有效避免名词、动词、形容词的重复。例如:
代词代替
这种方法主要用于解决名词的重复问题。例如:
同义词、反义词、派生词转换
名词、动词、形容词都适用这种方法。
短语优先原则
使用短语替换单词具有两大优势:
文章显得更为地道,增加亮点;增加字数。例:
常见的单词转化成短语的方法有:
形容词变短语方法:of+同根名词
常见的形容词及对应短语有:
动词变短语方法:同义短语替换
常用的动词和对应动词短语如下:
词义具体化原则
所谓词义具体化就是指写作过程中尽量避免使用意义宽泛、模糊的词,要根据语境使用具体、生动的词。
温馨提示,由于英语词义范围非常广泛,即便是同义词也只是某种程度上的近似,不可能在意义上完全对等,所以大家在选词时要注意同义词含义上的细小差别哦。
例如:
句一: So there arises the problem:What should we do to get rid of the wrong attitudes toward the migrant workers?
句二: So there arises the question:What should we do to get rid of the wrong attitudes toward the migrant workers?
problem指的是“实际存在的问题”或“需要解决的现实问题”,question指的是“可获得解释或回答的问题”,此处用question更为恰当。
三、写作句式
除了用词准确、多样外,好的作文还应在句式上有所突破。好的句式应该符合以下原则:
简洁性原则
句式简洁性原则包括句式无重复和语义简洁两个方面。句式无重复是针对同一篇文章中,过多使用同一种句式的现象提出的。在一篇文章中,要尽量避免使用雷同句式。例如:表达个人观点时,尽量不要通篇都是I think和in my opinion。要实现句式无重复,可以用我们接下来要讲到的长短句相间原则和特殊句式原则。语义简洁是指句与句之间联系紧密,语义上不重复。如果两个分句在语义上联系较紧密,建议用一个简单句来表达。
例如:
Work hard and you can laugh till the end and achieve the final success in future.
Work hard and you can achieve success in future.
原句论述了成功的条件,但在论述过程中,laugh till the end和achieve the final success语义重复。改后的句子简单直接、语义明了。
长短句相间原则
短句一般语气重,多在一个复杂的意思表达完成之后表示强调,富有力度;长句则适用于准确表达复杂的思想。运用长短句相间原则可以很好地发挥两种句子的优点。反之,如果只用长句或短句,则会使行文显得过于单调。所以,在写作中应该是长句和短句交替使用。
特殊句式原则
英语写作中有五大基本句式,具体见下表:
特殊句式是指任何由这五大句式衍生出来的句式。特殊句式是英语写作的重点和难点。特殊句式运用得当能为文章增色。
▌倒装
倒装句所表达出来的意思较普通句式更精彩,也更有分量。考生尤其要注意的是,“Only+状语”位于句首这种形式的倒装在写作中最为常用。
例:
With the help of cooperation, a company can become successful.
Only with the help of cooperation can a company become successful.只有开展合作,公司才能取得成功。
常见的倒装形式有:
▌强调
下面介绍几种常用的实用强调句型:
其他情况的强调:
▌其他特殊句式
具体如下:
句式注意事项:
①不管是哪种句式,都要尽量避免语法错误和拼写错误。因为平淡的句式总要好过错误的句式。
②一篇文章中,不要过多使用同一个句式。一篇文章中,不要过多使用长句,也不要过多使用短句;不要因为用非谓语结构代替状语从句或定语从句是高分句式就过多地使用;如果一篇文章中已经有了一个,最多两个同样的句式,考虑到句式的多样化,建议就不要再用同样的句式了。
作文想要的高分,不仅结构要清晰、用词要准确、句式也要多样。写作的方法技巧全都告诉大家了,剩下的就是动笔写啦!考前每天写一篇,自己按照上面的要求再修改一遍,肯定有提高的啦!
以下范文三篇推荐给大家
-- 四级范文3篇 --
1Topic 1个人信用
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief description of the picture and then express your views on the importance of personal credit. You should write at least 120 words but no more than180 words.
How did you handle it when your kid asked you that embarrassing question, “Daddy, what's your credit score?”
参考范文
On the Importance of Personal Credit
A thought-provoking question is raised in the picture that how we handle the embarrassing question when our kids ask us about our credit score if we have a bad credit report. With the popularity of credit card in modern society, we must pay high attention to our personal credit to avoid such an embarrassing question.
Firstly, personal credit report is a mirror of our honesty and credibility, which is of great significance for us to gain a foothold in society since nobody will believe a liar. Secondly, we should set a good example for our children. As the famous saying goes, there is no job more important than parenting. Paying off the credit card on time is a living example to teach our kids how to be a responsible man. In addition, a good credit record could bring us some benefits and convenience, such as an efficient loan when we are in need.
A small credit card mirrors a big world. Never belittle your personal credit because it really matters.
2Topic 2抵制盗版
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief description of the picture and then express your views on knockoffs. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
参考范文
My Views on Knockoffs
As is vividly depicted in the picture, the bears are painted to look like pandas. This picture reminds us of a social phenomenon that China is now suffering from an overflow of various knockoffs in the market.
Various knockoffs are so widespread in our market that almost everybody has frustrating experiences of buying them. Then, what should we do? In my view, it's our obligation to support authentic products and fight against knockoffs. The reasons are as follows. Firstly, we should support ingenuity and originality as well as authentic products, which are based on creativity. Secondly, knockoffs represent plagiarism in design and production. Thirdly, support for authentic products and fighting against knockoffs can help form a fine competitive atmosphere in our society so as to promote the comprehensive progress of the industry and the society.
In conclusion, we have every reason to fight against knockoffs and support ingenuity and creativity.
3Topic 3技术进步与生活方式的变迁
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief description of the picture and then discuss the changes in lifestyle caused by the advances of technologies. You should give sound arguments to support your views and write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
参考范文
The Technological Advances and the Changes in Lifestyle
In the picture, we can tell a gradual change of writing tools ranging from the brush to the pen and then to the computer with the handwriting growing poorer and poorer. This is the epitome of people's changes in lifestyle caused by the advances of technologies.
As is obviously demonstrated, the development of technology is a double-edged sword. It cannot be denied that people's life becomes more convenient and comfortable with the emergence of new and advanced technologies. However, modern technologies have also caused some negative impacts, which cannot be ignored either. In fact, some people are confined by technologies to a mechanical cage where they use machines at work and live like an ever-running machine, stiff and inflexible.
Therefore, to live a healthy life, people should make full use of the benefits brought by the technological advances and preserve the essence of the previous lifestyles.
-- 六级范文3篇 --
1Topic 1乐于助人
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief description of the picture and then express your view on helping others. You can cite examples to illustrate your point. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
参考范文
Don't Be Mean With Your Help
The cartoon meeting our eyes is quite worrying and thought-provoking, in which a not harmonious scene is depicted vividly. Just as what we can see from the picture above, a drowning man is signaling for help. A boy is about to give his aid when another man stops him and asks him “Have you thought of the consequences of helping him?” Helping others has always been a virtue in traditional Chinese culture. But nowadays it is strange that people dare not offer help to those in need.
Why, in this prosperous society, are people in China more reluctant to help others? It forces us to rethink whether we should help others regardless of any results. Admittedly, there are cases that help-givers are successively reported to be falsely identified as offenders, which makes common people become more risk-conscious and unwilling to offer their help.
Nevertheless, helping people in need should be advocated since it is always considered as a traditional virtue. To prevent such a tragedy as above from happening, efforts should be made for the benefit of those rescuers. Only in this way can we be sure that everyone in our society will be ready to help people in need.
2Topic 2 如何回报父母的爱
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief description of the picture and then express your view on the way to show our love for our parents in return. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
参考范文
How Do We Show Our Love for Our Parents in Return?
As can be seen in the picture, one boy remembers his own birthday and his friend's birthday; the other boy even knows his idol's birthday. Ironically, both of them forget their parents' birthdays. Our parents have done much for us since we were born. They give us lots of love and care, but we don't care for them enough. This picture reminds us that we should do something to show love for our parents in return.
What can we do to repay our parents? Firstly, we should talk with them as much as possible. It's said that parents today always feel lonely, so it's important for us to communicate with them. Secondly, doing housework at home seems to be a great chance to show our love. To do some housework not only relieves our parents' burden but also shows our gratitude for what they have done for the family. Finally, we are supposed to have a good future. The harder we work, the better results we'll have. If we make certain achievements, they'll be proud of us.
Parents' love is the most unconditional and thus the greatest love in the world. If we spend more time taking care of our parents, love will be always around them.
3Topic 3 劳动的价值
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief description of the picture and then express your view on the value of labor. You can cite examples to illustrate your point. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
参考范文
The Value of Labor
Nowadays, children are too lazy to do housework at home unless they are given pocket money. Just as the girl in the picture above, when her parents ask her to do household chores, she says, “Pay me, or I'll never do that!”
Simple as the picture is, the meaning it conveys is profound and thought-provoking. With many children being spoiled too much, their independence is gradually taken away, which in fact does great harm to their growth. Thus, it is necessary for children to realize the value of labor. For one thing, by doing housework, children will understand how hard it is for their parents to support the family, which in turn will urge them to make even greater efforts in their study. For another, doing housework contributes to cultivating children's sense of responsibility, and also helps them harvest the joy of labor. Last but not least, doing housework can develop the ability to stand on their own feet, which will benefit them in the whole life.
In view of the facts mentioned above, I strongly recommend that those who are not in the habit of doing housework start doing something immediately. Your parents will be pleased, and at the same time you will benefit a lot from it.
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