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My dream school starts at 8:30 a. m and ends at 3:30 p. m. They are three lessons in the morning and two in the afternoon. We didn t need to do so many homework. Therefore,we have more time with after- school activities. For example, we can do reading for one and a half hour and play sport for one hour every day. don t much for hours there My dream school look like a big garden. There are all kinds of the flowers and trees around the classroom buildings. We can lie on the grass for a rest, or sat by the lake listening music. The teachers here are kind and helpfully. They are not only our teachers but also our friends. looks sit helpful ∧ to Proof Reading 短文改错 What s the main trouble when correcting a composition? 1. 看不出句子有错。 2. 看出句子出错的地方 , 但答案不正确。或无法 改正。 “改错改错，越改越错”。因此了解改错的 题型特点，并在此基础上加以一定分项训练， 掌握一些解题技巧就非常有必要。 Procedures of the lesson 2. 近年新课标 I 卷改错测试点统计 3. 新改错解题策略及答题原则 1. 短文改错设错方式及规范 4. 解读短文改错口诀 5. 练习巩固 Right or Wrong? 增加 been ? I have offered a scholarship at a university. ? I have offered a scholarship at a university. been ? I have offered a scholarship at a university. been ∧ ∧ X ∨ X X X X I have got a good news to tell you. I have got a good news to tell you. I have got a good news to tell you. Right or Wrong? 删除 X X Right or Wrong? 修改 ? Three weeks ago I bought the electronic an dictionary at a shop. ? Three weeks ago I bought the electronic an dictionary at a shop. ? Three weeks ago I bought the electronic an dictionary at a shop. 以上为不规范答题 , 均不给分， 不能手下留情 E.g.: What s more, he wanted the thief know he was forgiven. So the next day,he posted the message on the poster-board … When he left for home the next morning, at the end of the driveway … to a for I can return to home now. the ∧ in 一 . 短文改错设错方式及规范 3.Unnecessary word I like playing piano. I major at English. 2.Missing word 1.Wrong word 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文， 请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。 文中 共有 10 处语言错误，每句中最多有两处 。 每 处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除 或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号 不计分。 年度 介 词 动 词 形或 容副 词词 代 词 名 词 连 词 冠 词 关 系 词 2014 2 1 3 1 1 1 1 0 2013 1 2 2 1 1 1 1 1 2012 2 3 1 2 1 0 0 1 2011 2 3 1 0 2 1 1 0 测试点 二、高考新课标 I 卷短文改错 测试点统计 三、新高考短文改错 应试策略及答题原则 三步 五原则 四不改 1. 通读全文 , 理解文章 . 2. 先易后难 , 找出明错 . 3. 对照考点 , 深入审读 . 1. 以 改变实词形式 为原则 . 2. 以单词形式变化最小为原则 . 3. 以 添删或更换虚词 为原则 . 4. 以 多“改正”少“添删 ”为原则． 5. 以保持原意不变为原则． 1. 标点符号不改。 2. 大小写不改。 3. 词序错误不改。 4. 单词拼写不改 。 文中出现带汉语注释的词， 在句中不可能用错。 Next It was a year ago when Joshua got a bike for Christmas, but he rode it every day. One morning, he suddenly found the bike gone. Ran to his front yard, he saw a man loading it into his car. He shouted, but the man drive off. As a devoted Christian, he told his dad he real forgave the thief. What s more, he wanted the thief know he was forgiven. and running drove that really ∧ to So the next day, he posted the message on the poster-board and put it in the before yard. To the person who stole my bike: You hurt my feelings. But I am a Christian and I forgive him! When he left for home the next morning, at the end of the driveway, the bike was back with new brakes ． front you a Back 得法者，事半功倍 I 从词法和逻辑错误分析 : II 从句法的角度去分析 : 解 题 方 法 I 词法和逻辑错误 : 1 ）动词形 1. For all these years, we had been allowing tomatoes to self seed where they please. 2. My father took me out camping for the first time …. My uncles all come along with bows and arrows for hunting. 3. Share with others makes me feel happy. have came 1. 动词的 时态 和 语态 错误 . 2. 主、谓不一致 的错误。 3. 非谓语动词形式 的误用 Sharing 4. One evening at sunset, we sat by the fire, have our barbecue. 5. Suddenly the arrows was flying down at us from the sky. 6. Amazing at how skillful they were, I was determined to be just as good. 7. It is difficult to understanding why she barks every minute she s outside. were Amazed understand having 8. The early morning barking have been disturbing us as we are often up all night with the baby. 9. Not only it provide the students with basic courses, but also it manages to encourage them to participate in colourful campus activities and social practice. 10. Don t panic or get out of line, and trying to remain quiet and calm. 11. Many rules have made to reduce the traffic crashes, especially for the ones involved in the pedestrians. does try been ∧ ∧ has 2 ）名词数 1. Last Saturday, as usual, he went to several class. 2. He helped me develop my interest in all that was alive and sometimes death around me. dead classes 1. 可数 与 不可数 名词的混用。 2. 可数 名词的 单复数 的错用。 3. 名词的 格 的误用 4. 词性的转换 3. The man said, “ my tooth are in the piece of chocolate on the floor. ” 4. We re called several time about Cleo s early morning barking. 5. I m deeply grateful for your advice that I should pay more attentions to practising my spoken English. 6. The police soon tracked the calls to a barber shop. attention barber s teeth times 3 ）还要注意形和副 1. We are growing wonderfully tomatoes at no cost! 2. My uncles immediate jumped up and shot their arrows on the bird. 3. I had noticed that the carriage was noise and filled with people. immdiately noisy wonderful 1. 形容词、副词、名词等 词性 的误用。 2. 原级，比较级和最高级 的误用。 4. Li Ming enjoyed himself, competing and chatting with his father, and felt relaxing in the open air. 5. I really take proud in this experience. 6. There are more than 200 excellent teachers and 5 ， 000 lovely students studying hardly in our school. 7. I hope I can practise my spoken English there as more as possible. pride hard much relaxed 4 ）代词格，细领悟 1. The survey also shows that libraries are where students get most of his books. 2. My uncles immediately jumped up and shot their arrows on the bird. Neither of the arrows hit the target. none their 1. 前后人称不一致。 2. 人称代词 ， 物主代词 , 反身代词 的误用。 3. 不定代词 的误用及混用。 3. Though situations are tough today, a lot of we post80s are making great efforts to live a good life. 4. It has been repaired and strengthened several times over it s past one hundred years history. 5. I think important to learn the computer well. 6. Thank you for the English dictionary that you bought it for me. its it ∧ us 5) 介词短语要牢记 1. If you hear the alarm, stand in line at the door and wait your teacher to lead you outside. 2. Then we made him breathe using the mouth-to-mouth way. After the boy came to himself, we sent him hospital at once and telephoned his parents. to for ∧ 主要考查 介词短语 和 习惯用法 的搭配。 ∧ 3. Nearly five years ago, with the help by our father, my sister and I planted some cherry tomatoes in our back garden. 4. I am grateful that I got the chance to learn for him. 5. Soon they came up a good idea. 6. The woman was angry and said the man, “ What are you doing, sir? What are you looking for? from with ∧ ∧ to of 6 ）冠词、连词常光顾 1. Today I can still remember how I became good table tennis player. 2. But there was a man sitting beside her in a next seat. 3. Besides, Cleo tends to bark a average of six hours a day. the a ∧ an １ . 冠词 a,an 和 the 的错用或少用． ２．连词 but,and ， or, so,because, although, therefore, however 的错用． 4. Now many girls prefer to marry a man who owns a house and a car. Therefore, I don t think love built on houses and cars is true love, and I doubt how long it will last. 5. On Monday, Li Ming was energetic but active in class. 6. “ 桓畯摬?挠潨獯??潧摯洠橡牯愠摮愠朠潯?湵癩牥楳祴尿 7. They had expected to find a free place to live in, so they experienced a hard winter. and or but However Our English teacher begin to teach us in 2012. She had been teaching English for more than two year. She likes we, and she is very strict in all of us. Although she is a bit short and not so beautifully, but we consider her as our friend. She is really good teacher. We are love her very much. We re sure we ll get in well with each other. began has years us with beautiful ∧ a on 动词形 名词数 代词格，细领悟 介词短语要牢记 还要注意形和副 冠词连词常光顾 五、 Practice Passage1 My dream school starts at 8:30 a. m and ends at 3:30 p. m. They are three lessons in the morning and two in the afternoon. We didn t need to do so many homework. Therefore , we have more time with after-school activities. For example, we can do reading for one and a half hour and play sport for one hour every day. My dream school look like a big garden. There are all kinds of the flowers and trees around the classroom buildings. We can lie on the grass for a rest, sat by the lake listening music. The teachers here are kind and helpfully. They are not only our teachers but also our friends. Passage 2

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