【帮我找一些初中作文英语】2022年中考英语写作热点预测及优秀满分范文(4)

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六、美育考试

书面表达

教育部发布“力争到2022年全面实现美育考试”的新闻，引起了广大教师、学生和家长的关注。上周，你们班同学就“音乐美术是否应该纳入初中毕业生学业考试”进行了讨论，学生们各自表达了自己的意见。请根据下表的内容用英语写一篇短文，报告讨论结果，谈谈自己的想法。

阿格里

得到更多学习音乐和艺术的机会

提高自己的音乐和艺术技能

Disagree

要学习和准备更多的科目

感到很大的压力

Your opinion

至少两点

注意：

1.短文必须包含表格中提供的要点，并能适当发挥。

本文不得显示真实姓名、学校名称和地点名称。

3.字数：约80(短文开头已经给出，仅供选择，不包括总字数)。

Lastweek，we discussed whether the high school entrance examination should include music and art .

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样本写作

Lastweek，we discussed whether the high school entrance examination should include music and art .

students have different opinions . some students think that it offers us more chance to study music and art . there fore，We will pay more attention

ents will feel more pressure.

In my opinion, music and art should be in the entrance examination for high school. As we all know, art and music play an important role in our life which can help us develop our interests and make our life more colorful. The most important thing is that we can relax ourselves by art and music in Grade 9.

七、使用手机的问题

假如你叫李华，你在写作业时使用手机，妈妈看到后很生气。请你根据以下要点写一篇短文描述事情发生的经过。

（1）上周日晚上你利用手机查字典；

（2）妈妈进来了发现你在用手机，认为你在玩游戏，很生气；

（3）你向妈妈做了解释；

（4）妈妈要求：使用手机应征求家长的许可，并且控制好时间^

（5）你认为……

参考词汇：许可permission

要求：

（1）词数：80～100个。

（2）开头已给出，不计入总词数。

（3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。

Last Sunday evening...

_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

范文：

Last Sunday evening, I was not happy. I didn’t understand many of the words while I was doing my homework. So I looked them up on the mobile phone. Suddenly, my mother came in, and she got angry because she thought I played games. I felt bad and explained to her. She suggested that I should ask for permission and control the time.

In my opinion, we can use the mobile phone to look up new words. It is a useful tool in our studies. Parents should make a rule of using the mobile phone so that their children can use it properly.

1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作，写作时承接短文开头。根据所给材料，讲述上周日晚因使用手机与妈妈发生不愉快的事情。

2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称进行叙述，时态采用一般过去时为主。事情发生的起因、过程及结果等要叙述完整，观点要清晰，语言表达符合英语习惯。

八、亲子关系

假设你是 Susan，在家里你的父母总是对你有很多要求，你是否有时感到厌烦？你是怎样解决的？请你根据下列要点提示用英语写一篇短文。

（1）父母要求你每天打扫房间；不能玩电脑游戏；晚上10点前必须睡觉

（2）你觉得父母虽太严厉，但理解他们。

（3）你决定与父母多交流，为父母做些家务。

（4）你认为……。

My name is Susan. There are many rules in my

范文：

My name is Susan. There are many rules in my family. My parents want me to clean the room every day. I am not allowed to play computer games in my free time. I can’t go out on school nights. I must go to bed by 10 pm. I think my parents are too strict with me. Sometimes I feel bored, but I understand they really love me. I decided to communicate with my parents as much as possible, sharing my happiness and sadness with them. And I should often help them do housework because they are busy with their work, too. I’m sure if we trust each other, we will get on well with our parents.

本文属于材料作文，针对父母对你要求过多你感到厌烦这一问题，你是如何解决的。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。

亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如want sb to do, be allowed to do, in my free time, be strict with, decide to do, communicate with, as much as possible, share...with..., help sb do, be busy with以及get on well with。增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。

九、环保问题

当今社会，绿色环保已成为我们关注的重要话题。假如你是光明中学的学生林涛，去年夏天参加了“爱无限，绿无边”环境保护活动。请根据以下要点，写一篇英语短文，描述该经历，并表达自己的想法。

（1）去年夏天参加了绿色星球俱乐部。

（2）每天早起发传单、宣传绿色生活。

（3）帮助垃圾分类、清理公园街道。

（4）起早虽然很难，坚持做了一个月。

（5）收到了社区的感谢信。

（6）你的感受……

参考词汇：传单 leaflets 分类 separate 感谢信 a thank-you letter

要求：

（1）词数：80~100个。

（2）短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数。

（3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。

People are caring about environment around us. It’s our duty to protect environment.

Last summer, __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

范文：

People are caring about environment around us. It’s our duty to protect environment.

Last summer, I joined the Green Planet Club to do something meaningful. I got up very early to hand out leaflets and told people the importance of living a green life. Besides, I taught people how to separate waste in communities and helped clean up parks and streets. At first, I found it hard to get up early. It was very tiring, but I did it for one month. I got a thank-you letter from the community in the end.

I feel proud because I can offer help. What’s more, I am also thankful to the people who have helped me.

1.题干解读：本文要求描述参加“爱无限，绿无边”环境保护活动的经历，结合提示内容进行写作，注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。

2.写作指导：写作时要以第一人称行文，时态以一般过去时为主。作文可分为三段，第一段已经给出；第二段结合提示要点描述参加活动时的详细经历；第三段进行总结。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。

十、我的老师们是志愿者

请你根据以下内容提示，以“My Teachers Are Volunteers”为题，为学校广播站英语专栏写一篇短文，介绍你的老师们做交通志愿者的事情。

（1）每天放学后，老师们都会在学校旁边的路口做交通志愿者。

（2）老师们穿着红色的马甲，拿着旗子，保证学生安全。

（3）尽管夏天很热，冬天很冷，但老师们始终坚持值班。

（4）多年来，学生从未发生过交通事故。

（5）你觉得……

参考词汇：马甲 vest

要求：

（1）词数：80～100个。

（2）短文的题目和开头已给出，不计入总词数。

（3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。

My Teachers Are Volunteers

When school is over every day,_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

范文：

My Teachers Are Volunteers

When school is over every day, our teachers will be traffic safety volunteers at the crossing near our school. With flags in their hands, they put on red vest to ensure students’ safety. Although summer is hot and winter is cold, our teachers are always on duty. Hard work pays off. Over the years, students have never had a traffic accident. I think traffic safety is a common topic everyone talks about everyday. But there is still some people who don’t have strong sense of traffic safety. Our teachers have made a contribution to our school and increased the students’ awareness of safety.

1.题干解读：本题为材料作文，要求根据所给要点提示写一篇短文，介绍你的老师们做交通志愿者的事情。

2.写作指导：写作时人称应用第一人称，时态应用现在时。写作时所有要点都应包含在内，并且在最后要就这件事谈谈自己的看法。文章应做到要点齐全，条理清晰，不要出现单词拼写及语法方面的错误。