【文明礼貌有什么意义英语作文初中】2017年安徽高中入学考试英语写作预测图

目前安徽英语作文(书面表达)分数25分，考前有效训练有利于提高书面表达质量，获得高分。

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用人类

每个人都有自己的偶像。相信你心中也一定有“星星”在闪烁。当我们面临困难时，这个“星星”使我们摆脱了困境。当我们忧郁的时候，是这个“星星”让我们心中开着快乐的花。(威廉莎士比亚，哈姆雷特，快乐)请以“The Star in My Heart”为题写一篇短文。

要求：1 .准确的语言表达，连贯的短文；

这篇文章不应该出现真实姓名和学校名称。

3.80个单词左右。

[审议地图]仔细阅读给定的文字提示，提取信息。

1.因为介绍自己心中的偶像，所以属于角色介绍类作文，最好介绍身边对自己有很大影响的人物。(建议学生先回忆身边的人物，从中选出影响力较深的人来决定好的人物。)。

2.提示中重点指出偶像对我们的积极影响，所以文章要说明他对我们的具体影响。

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开始连接心中的偶像要点提示素材：每个吸引人物的人心中都有偶像。我的偶像正文介绍：偶像介绍，以及她对我们的具体影响的简要介绍，偶像介绍，我们遇到困难的时候(get out of trouble)让我们忧郁的时候(be in a bad mood)在我们心中绽放出快乐的花朵(cheer up)结束(moved deeply)在她的帮助下，我们的英语成绩更好。(with the help of)感谢她对我们的帮助。(thank sb。for doing sth。)〔高分的范文

The Star in My Heart

there ' s a star in every one ' s heart . the one in my heart is Mrs . Xu .

Mrs . Xu is not well-known . She is an English teacher . She is always beautiful and graceful . in our daily life，She makes jokes with us just like

We are moved deeply by her。and with the help of her，we do better in our English now。we all thank her for helping us so much . as students

[写作框架]

there ' s a star in every one ' s heart . the one in my heart is自己心中的偶像。

偶像iz特征。She is职业。She is always外貌和性格特征。In our daily life，she日常生活中如何与我们相处。when we arein trouble，she will try her best to practice。when

We are moved deeply by her。and with the help of her，we在她的帮助下取得了我们取得的成绩。we all thank her for helping us so much。as students，I think that

[短语和句型]

佩尔松(人物)

帕特妈妈，马达妈妈，帕伦斯父母，特彻老师。

Friend朋友classmate同班同学neighbor/neighbor邻居

基本信息(基本信息)

Was/were born on/in……。(持续时间)

Birthday and birthplace(生日和出生地)

家庭背景A poor/rich family贫穷富裕的家庭

the son of a poor family一个贫穷家庭的儿子

when he was a small boy当他还是小男孩的时候

a boy(girl) of 15/16...一个15/16岁的男孩（女孩）……

come from a poor family来自一个贫穷的家庭

◆Education(所受教育)

graduate from...毕业于…… Class X, Grade XX年级X班

he studies English, Chinese, math...他学习英语、汉语、数学……

learn from...向……学习

◆Macroscopic features(外貌特征)

tall高的; short矮的; fat胖的; thin瘦的; strong强壮的; weak虚弱的; slim苗条的; beautiful漂亮的; pretty漂亮的; good-looking长相好的; handsome英俊的; ugly丑陋的; medium build中等个; powerful build体格强壮; long/short hair长/短头发; straight/curly hair直/卷发; pale/dark skin苍白/黑皮肤; big/high nose大/高鼻子; watery eyes水汪汪的大眼睛; big/bright eyes大/明亮的眼睛; baby face娃娃脸; long face长脸; round face圆脸

◆Character traits(性格特征)

1Positive(积极的)

loving细心的，充满爱的; strict严肃的; open-minded思想开放的; understanding善解人意的; patient有耐心的; encouraging有勇气的; friendly/kind友好/善良的; warm-hearted热心的; generous慷慨的; cheerful愉快的，高兴的; easy-going随和的; hard-working刻苦的; shy害羞的; sensible理性的; optimistic乐观的; funny有趣的; active积极的; humorous幽默的; honest诚实的; confident自信的; polite有礼貌的; modest谦虚的; helpful有帮助的; brave勇敢的

2Negative(消极的)

bad-tempered坏脾气的; boring无趣的; dull迟钝的; dishonest不诚实的; impatient没有耐心的; jealous嫉妒的; lazy懒惰的; rude粗鲁的; mean小气的; selfish自私的; timid羞涩的; careless粗心的; greedy贪婪的; cruel残忍的，残酷的

◆Clothes color (服饰颜色)

red红色的；yellow黄色的；green绿色的；blue蓝色的；black黑色的；white白色的；orange橙色的；pink粉色的；purple紫色的

◆Big events in his or her life (人生大事)

make a big decision 作出重大决定

make up one’s mind to do sth. 下定决心做某事

have a ... way of doing sth. 有一种做某事的……方法

win a prize in... competition 在……比赛中获奖

try one’s best to do sth. 尽全力做某事

be good at... 擅长……

win a gold model... 获得……金牌

◆Evaluation (评价)

set ab. a good example 给某人树立一个好的榜样

be respected by everyone 被所有人尊敬

sing high praise for .../ speak（think）highly of... 对……高度赞扬

remember sb. forever 永远记住某人

be famous as... 作为……而著名

be regarded as... 被当作……

发表观点类

“蛋奶工程”惠及千百万学生，可是，在我们周围，有许多同学把吃不完的鸡蛋牛奶乱扔乱弃。对此，你有什么看法和好的建议？假设你是张伟，请用英语给你的同学Tom写一封邮件和他交流自己的想法。

要求：

1. 语言表达准确，短文连贯通顺；

2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；

3. 80词左右。

【审题指导】仔细阅读所给文字，提取关键信息：

1. 抓准文体。本文表达自己对蛋奶工程中浪费现象的看法和建议，属于议论文。

2. 抓住重点。文章应该首先亮明观点，说明浪费鸡蛋和牛奶是不正确的。然后重点谈论如何杜绝浪费，有哪些方法可以解决这个问题。最后号召大家行动起来、节约粮食。

4. 确定人称。本文要从自己的认识角度谈论粮食浪费现象，因为作者也是学生中的一员，因此主要使用第一人称。如果谈到其他同学，也可使用第三人称。

5. 把握时态。本文谈论当前的浪费现象，主要是用一般现在时。如果谈到过去或将来的事情，则使用一般过去时或一般将来时。

【写作指导】

对蛋奶工程浪费现象的看法和建议
要点提示	素材串联
开头：引出话题，提出观点	1. 蛋奶工程的性质是暖心工程（Eggs and Milk Project; a heartwarming project）；2. 目前，浪费现象比较严重(throw the left eggs and milk everywhere)；3. 我们不应该浪费粮食（shouldn’t waste the food）；4. 许多贫困地区缺少粮食（poor areas；have little to eat）。
正文：具体谈论浪费的错误以及怎样解决浪费现象	1. 我们应该吃完鸡蛋和牛奶（eat up）；2. 如果吃不完，带回家喂宠物（take them home; feed the dogs or cats）；3. 如果不想吃，可以送给没有吃到的同学（give them to others），或者告诉老师（tell our teacher），把蛋奶捐出去（give them away）。
结尾：回扣观点，提出号召	节约是我们的责任（our duty），让我们行动起来（take actions）。

【优秀范文】

Dear Tom，

Eggs and Milk Project is a heartwarming project provided to primary and junior students in our province. However, a few students throw the left eggs and milk everywhere. I think we shouldn’t waste the food and that’s not a good habit. As we know, in many poor areas, people have little to eat, and food is produced by farmers with hard work.

So we should save the food especially the free food by government. I think we should eat up the eggs and milk. If we can’t eat up them, we should take them home to feed the dogs or cats. If we don’t want to eat the eggs and milk, we should give them to others who don’t have. Or we must tell our teacher to give them away to students in poor places.

Saving food is our duty. Let’s take actions!

Yours,

Zhang Wei

【写作模板】

某件事情is good for 对象（人/物）.First, they can 有利之处. It also helps 好的方面.Another advantage is that具体的有利之处.

However, there are also disadvantages. For one thing, homework不利之处.For another thing, they can’t干自己想干的事情.

In my opinion, 某件事情 is 好的方面, but提出自己的观点和看法.

【短语和句型】

◆Personal view(个人看法)

Some people believe that..., while others think that...有些人相信……，而其他人认为……

There are two sides of opinions on it: one is...; the other is...关于这点有两方面观点，一个是……，另一个是……

as far as I am concerned/ in my opinion(view)我认为/在我看来

from my point of view...在我看来……

◆Prove the thesis(论证观点/理由)

The reason why...is that...……的原因是……

For one thing...for another... 一方面……，另一方面……

On the one hand...On the other hand 一方面……另一方面……

First...second...last but not least...首先……其次……最后但同样重要的是……

what’s more此外in addition此外 particularly 尤其是 in contrast相比之下

◆Conclusion(结论)

in a word=in brief/total =in all/short 总之；简言之

as a result结果above all 总之therefore因此；所以so因而；所以；那么

in my opinion/I think依我看from the above综上所述

I hope...我希望……It is clear that...……是显而易见的

As we all know...众所周知……It is well-known that...众所周知……

As/So far as I know...据我所知……

Only in this way can we achieve our goal.只有这样，我们才能实现目标。

From all what I said, I agree to the thought that...从我所说的来看，我同意……的看法。

In my view, I hold the point of view that...在我看来，我支持……的观点。

I am sure my opinion is both...and...我相信我的观点既……又……

◆suggestions（建议）

What/How about doing sth？做某事怎么样?

Why not do sth.?=Why don’t you do sth?为什么不做某事呢？

You’d better do sth. 你最好做某事。

I suggest that you(should) do sth.我觉得你应该做某事。

◆Expectation(期望)

hope/wish希望expect期望suggest建议promise承诺

look forward to期待care for关心grow up长大

I hope that he can take good care of himself. 我希望他能照顾好自己。

I wish you can give me more care and love. 我希望你能给予我更多的爱和关心。

事物介绍类

在本周的英语课堂上，你们班同学针对“文明礼貌的重要性”这个话题展开了激烈的讨论。请你以 is important 为题写一篇80词左右的英语短文。

要求：

1. 语言表达准确，短文连贯通顺；

2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；

3. 80词左右。

【审题指导】细读所给的文字提示，可以提取信息：

1. 此文要求先补全题目，再就某一方面进行说明。

2. 发表自己看法时用第一人称，其他人用第三人称；时态为一般现在时。

3. 80词左右，文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称。

【写作指导】

礼仪的重要性
要点提示	素材串联
开头：引出主题	良好的行为习惯很重要（good manners are important）
正文：举例阐述	1. 变得更快乐（would be happier ）2. 保持干净（ help us keep the place clean ）3. 使我们相处得更友善（help us to be friendly with each other ）
结尾：自己的观点	使我们和他人感到快乐（make us and others happy）

【高分范文】

As we all know, good manners are important in our daily life. Having good manners can make us and others happy.

There are lots of good manners around us in the daily life. For example,it’s a good manner thatwewaitpatiently in line instead of pushing in front of each other while waiting for a bus. Also, keeping the place where we live clean in place of dropping litter everywhere. The cleanerwe keep,the healthier we are.

As for me, good mannershelp us to be friendly witheach otherso thatwe can make more friends and live a happy life. So, let’skeep the good mannerswe have and acquire good habits we don’t have.

That’s all. Thank you.

【写作模板】

As we all know, good manners are日常生活中的重要性 and 对别人的影响. We should日常生活中的礼貌做法1. Also, we should日常生活中的礼貌做法2 because原因. In my opinion, 自己的看法.

That’s all. Thank you.

【短语与句型】

事物介绍类文章一般从以下几个方面入手：说明事物属性—介绍它的作用—对人的影响

◆事物

cook 做饭 friendship 友谊 holiday 假期

shopping 购物 health 健康 exercise 锻炼

an unforgettable day 难忘的一天 a pleasant holiday 愉快的一天

first of all 首先 What’s more 其次 in fact 事实上

as a result 结果是 As we all know,… 我们都知道

◆作用

important 重要的 useful 有用的 valuable 珍贵的

educational 有教育意义的

From my point of view/opinion, it’s important to ... 在我看来，……

As for me, it is +adj.+ for sb. to do sth. 对我来说，让某人做某事是……的

◆影响

learn from 从中学习 teach us 教会我们 have influence on us 对我们有影响

We would/should.... 我们将/应该……

We’d better/It is better for us to...我们最好……

. If we...，we’ll ... 如果我们……，我们将会……

2015中考英语作文必背经典范文

1.中考英语作文范文：Dreams and Reality

Dreams and Reality

When we talk about dreams, we are so excited, we have many dreams, such as being a famous person, traveling around the world and so on. Dreams are what we pursue for a lifetime, with many dreams, we have motivation to fight for our life. The opposite side of dream is reality, we have to face reality everyday, reality is what we perceive in our life. Reality always frustrates us to be successful. We need to balance them. First, we need to face reality, though it is not ideal, we live in a world, we have to know exactly who we are. Second, to make our dreams come true, we need to adjust our dreams according to the reality。

译文：

梦想与现实

当我们谈到梦想的时候，会感到很兴奋，我们有很多理想，比如成为一个出名的人，环游世界等等。梦想是我们一生所追求的，拥有梦想，我们才有动力为生活奋斗。与梦想相反的另一面就是现实，我们不得不每天面对现实，现实是我们生活中所觉察到的。现实总是让我们在成功的路上受挫。我们需要平衡他们。第一，我们需要面对现实，虽然不理想，但是我们是生活在世界上，需要清楚地知道自己是谁。第二，为了实现我们的梦想，我们需要根据现实调整梦想。

2.中考英语作文范文：如何提高记忆力?

How to Improve Memory?

Memory is important for everyone in all ages. How to improve it? It is a complex question. I have several suggestions. Firstly, have enough rest. Enough sleep can make sure brain works normally, because when people sleep, their brain and other organs also can rest. Enough rest can provide enough energy. Secondly, keep always thinking. Do not get used to the current situation. Keeping thinking when meets things can exercise brain. Thirdly, eat some healthy food that is good for memory, such as, radish, cabbage and spinach. I think these are helpful to improve memory。

译文：

如何提高记忆力？

记忆力对于每个年龄段的人都是很重要的。如何提高记忆力呢？这是一个复杂的问题。我有几个建议。首先，充足的休息。充足的睡眠可以保证大脑正常运作，因为人在睡觉的时候，他们的大脑和其他器官也得到了休息。足够的休息可以为它们提供充足的能量。其次，保持思考。不要安于现状。遇到的事情时要坚持思考可以锻炼大脑。第三，吃一些健康的、对记忆力有好处的食物，例如，萝卜，白菜，菠菜。我觉得这些都是有助于提高记忆力的。

3.中考英语作文范文：我最喜欢的课程—英语

My Favorite Subject---English

I like English most, because English is so popular these days. As far as I’m concerned, English is a well-known international language. If I could speak English well, I would be able to communicate with the people all over the world。

Nowadays, English is widely used in news, business, communication and tourism. Especially after China enters WTO, our country needs more genius who is good at English. Mastering English can help us find more job opportunities。

What’s more, some English speaking countries like Australia, New Zealand, America and Canada are very beautiful. I want to travel to these countries very much. So I must learn English well。

译文

我最喜欢的课程——英语

我最喜欢英语，因为英语在这段时间很流行。我觉得英语是总所周知的国际语言。如果我能说好英语，我就可以和世界各地的人交流了。

如今，英语在新闻，商务，通信和旅游上被广泛使用。尤其是在中国加入WTO之后，我国需要更多擅长英语的人才。掌握英语能帮助我们找到更多的就业机会。

更重要的是，一些说英语的国家如澳大利亚，新西兰，美国和加拿大都很漂亮。我非常想去那些国家旅行。所以我必须学好英语。

4.中考英语作文范文：英语学习计划

Plan for English Learning

I’m a middle school student. I love English, but it’s hard for me. Now I have a good plan to learn English。

I have a pronunciation problem. I can’t pronounce so well. So I plan to listen to the tape and read after it. I can’t read English passages quickly and can’t write a passage clearly. Now I plan to read more and practice writing often. As for listening, sometimes I can’t understand what others are saying. So I plan to improve myself by listening to the radio and TV. Grammar is the most difficult for me. I have no idea of it, but I think my English teacher can help me with it。

With this English-learning plan, I’m hoping for great progress。

译文：

英语学习计划

我是一名中学生。我喜欢英语，但是对我来说却很难。现在我有一个很好的英语学习计划。

我的发音有点问题。我发音不好。所以我打算听磁带并跟读。我不能快速地阅读英语文章，也不能清清楚楚地写文章。现在我计划看多些书，经常练习写作。至于听力，有时候我无法理解其他人在说什么。所以我打算通过听收音机和电视来提高我自己。对我来说语法是最难的。我都不知道怎么办，不过我觉得我的英语老师能够帮助我。

有了这个英语学习计划，我希望能取得很大的进步。

5.中考英语作文范文：享受比赛

Once I saw the TV show, it was about the fathers and their kids having the match, they were separated by five groups and compete for the match. At first, they were competing happily, but as the game came to the end, the last group was so worried. The father inspired his kid to stick on and finish the match, while the kid was crying because he knew he must be the last. After the match, the father told his kid that winning was not the most important thing for the match, the first thing was to enjoy the game and finish it, the result was not that important. I agree with the father, the child must be endowed with the consciousness that to enjoy the game is more important than to win. Every match can only have one win, but we can enjoy every match。

曾经我看到一个电视节目，那是关于爸爸和孩子在比赛，他们分成五个组，在进行比赛。一开始，他们比得很开心，但是随着比赛来到结尾，最后的那组显得很着急。爸爸鼓励他的孩子坚持完成比赛，然而孩子却在哭泣，因为他知道他肯定是最后一名。比赛过后，爸爸告诉孩子，对于比赛来说，赢不是最重要的，最重要的是享受比赛，并且完成它，结果也不是那么的重要。我同意那位爸爸的话，孩子必须要有这样的意识，享受比赛比赢得比赛更为重要。每个比赛只有一个赢家，但是我们可以享受每场比赛。

6.中考英语作文范文：我将来的计划

When I chose to study further, it is because I want to avoid the job pressure, now three years will pass, I come to my cross road again, at this time, I must make my choice, I can’t avoid the pressure anymore. I have already made my future plan, it has two parts。

当我选择深造的时候，是因为我想要避开工作的压力，如今三年即将过去，我又来到了十字路口，这一次，我必须做出决定，我再也不能逃避压力了。我已经制定了将来的计划，那有两部分。

One part of my future plan is that I want to be a teacher. This is my career plan, being a teacher is always my dream, I can pass my knowledge to students, I like to talk to them, I want to lead them to the successful road. So now I must pay attention to the recruit message, I should seize every chance to be a teacher。

我将来计划的其中一部分就是我想要成为一名教师。这是我的职业计划，成为一名教师一直以来都是我的梦想，我能把我的知识传递给我的学生，我喜欢和他们聊天，我想要把他们引导到成功的路上。所以现在我必须要关注招聘信息，应该抓住每一个成为教师的机遇。

The other part of my future plan is that I want to travel around the world. Being a teacher can make me have many vacations, so I can make used of these vacations and to carry out my travel plan. I have heard about many interesting foreign things, so I want to go out and have a look at the world。

我将来计划的另一部分就是我想要环游世界。成为一位教师能让我有多点假期，这样我就可以充分利用这些假期来实现我的旅游计划。我已经听说了很多国外有趣的东西，我想要走出去看一看这个世界。

7.中考英语作文范文：快递的优势

As the development of computer, people count on computer so much, now most businesses are done online, trading online saves people a lot of time and it is very convenient. As more and more people choose to shop online, there comes the relative services, the most important one is express deliver. Many years ago, express deliver is not that popular, now it becomes the main tool for people to receive online products. Express deliver is very fast, the companies make the promise that the customers can get their products in three days. Many years ago, people can get their things in a week, now express deliver shorten the time. What’s more, the express deliver can deliver the products to the customers’ homes; people don’t have to go out, how convenient it is. I like to use express deliver, it facilitates my life and saves me a lot of time。

随着电脑的发展，人们很依赖电脑，现在大部分的生意都在网上成交，网上交易节省了人们很多时间，也很方便。随着越来越多的人选择网上购物，相应的服务应运而生，其中最重要的就是快递。很多年以前，快递并不是那么的受欢迎，现在它成为了人们接收网上产品的主要交通工具。快递很快速，公司承诺顾客可以在三天内收到他们的产品。很多年以前，人们能在一周内收到他们的产品，现在快递缩短了时间。而且，快递能把产品送到客人的家里，人们不用走出去，这是多么方便啊。我喜欢使用快递，它方便了我的生活，节省了时间。

8.中考英语作文范文：杜绝浪费

When I was small, I like to eat a lot of food, but I have a habit, I will not eat up all the food, I just like to taste all of it. When my mother saw this, she felt bad for me, she told me that all the food was the farmers’ hard work, I should not waste it. Thinking about this, I felt so shameful about my bad behavior, I decided to eat up the food. Wasting the food should be condemned, especially in the cities, people like to waste the food, they want to keep thin and only eat small portion. Now, the government advocates people clean the plate, this movement is welcomed by the public, more and more people have the idea not to waste the food。

在我小的时候，我喜欢吃很多东西，但是我有一个习惯，我不会把东西吃完，我喜欢浪费食物。当我的妈妈看到这些，她对我感觉不好，她告诉我所有的食物都是农民辛勤劳作的，我不应该浪费食物。想到这些，我对自己的坏习惯感到惭愧，我决定吃完所有的食物。浪费食物应该受到谴责，特别是在大城市，人们喜欢浪费食物，他们想要保持苗条，只吃小部分。现在，政府提倡人们光盘，这个做法得到了大众的肯定，越来越多的人意识到不浪费食物。