【写妈妈的英语作文初中】中学英语作文满分技巧，给正在准备考试的你

2021年中考英语作文评分标准及满分技巧，考生必须看！

第一，结构要明确

结构清晰真的很重要。众所周知，阅卷老师们要在规定的时间内阅读数千篇作文，明确的结构使阅卷老师一眼就能看出来，自然会喜欢你的作文。(莎士比亚)。

什么结构比较好？那就是三段式。

第一段要开门见山地提出主题。比如，写我妈妈。第一段直接说my mother is a worker . she is beautiful and she is a good mother。明确自己的观点。

第二段要说她为什么是个好妈妈。1.she works hard . 2 . she is very strict with me . 3 . she always encourages me and help me when I am in trouble。详细说明了妈妈的优点。

第三段结束。你可以发表自己的观点，也可以提出建议和希望。示例：I love my mother。I love my family！

第二，时态要准确

英语作文不仅有结构，还有评分老师最敏感的东西，即时态，这是作文是否得到高分的关键。句子时态要清楚，同时人称要一致，数字要一致，前后要呼应。根据内容要求，确定事情过去是已经发生还是以后发生。例如，把一件事描述成一般过去的时间。(威廉莎士比亚，哈姆雷特，)要写经常发生的事情或人物的描写，通常要写现在的时间。对未来的展望应该使用一般的未来。过去的事情对现在的影响或过去到现在的情况都在现在完成的时候使用。不能随便配对。

第三，球体的运用要灵活

学生写作文时，为了避免不必要的失分，应该尽量使用有把握的单词。当然，定语是从句、宾语从句等句型，关键的时候写一两个就可以增加句子文采。(威廉莎士比亚，温斯顿，宾语，宾语，宾语，宾语)英语中有很多简单却能表达很多意思的短语。这些短语的运用可以使作文更有原创性。

First of all、secondly、finally、last、so that、in order that和not.but，not only.还可以使用相关单词，如but also，还可以使用高级点，如In a word、all in all(用于摘要)、but、yet和however(用于折弯)。

经验的评分老师很在意这些逻辑连接词。因为这些词反映了整个句子的思维方式。(莎士比亚)。

第四，写下整个要点。

近年来各地英语提示性作文较多。也就是说，写作内容几乎都有要点提示。准确地说，给写作提纲通常是3-5个提示点，这种作文要记住同学们不要逐字翻译，但提示必须反映在句子中。文章写得很好。如果错过重点，就会扣分。因此，重点就是文章第二段内容。学生们要写完提示点，然后以提示点为中心充分发挥，丰富自己写的内容。

第五，写作要认真

这一点需要同学们非常重视，作文的文章一定要规范整洁，同一篇文章笔记规范整洁，笔记混乱之间可能会有2 ~ 5分之差。

给阅卷老师印象最深的是你的文章。最简单的得分点是我们严肃的文章。整洁漂亮的字迹给评审老师留下美好的第一印象和愉快的心情，扣分时自然会“手下留情”。

请记住，大家不能修改，只要情况允许，就可以起草。避免不必要的失分。

漂亮的字体可以练习。大家心里注意自己的文章，就能写好。是你。

作文评分标准

期中考试作文一般从内容、语言、组织结构三个方面打分(总分20分)。

(一)内容(满分8)

7-8分：内容符合主题，意思一致，明确完整。

5-6分：内容基本符合主题，意思大致一致，表达基本清晰，但不完全。

2-4分：内容不符合主题，意思不一致，表达不清楚，偏离了部分主题。

0-1分：文章不符合题目，表达不好。

(b)语言(满分8)

字数：每5个单词扣0.5分等。只写个别单词，单词一句话也不说，不给分。

拼写：从所有错误中扣除0.5分，不重复计算相同的错误。

语法：每次从错误中扣除0.5分，同样的语法错误不重复得分。

标点符号，大小写：两个地方都错误地扣0.5分，但扣分总和不超过1分。

(c)组织结构(100分4)

内容充实，上下文一致，用语规范，表达准确，没有语法错误。词汇和句式运用得当，良好的句型和习惯性表达用语的人可以给3-4分。

内容充实，不用废话，上下文一致，用语规范，表达准确，没有语法错误或很少。词汇和句式运用得当，良好的句型和习惯性表达用语的人可以给2分。

一般来说，内容和语言累计分数必须在15分以上(包括在内)，才能获得1-2分的组织结构分。

如果内容和语言在15分以下，文章中有积极的句型和表达，适当的时候可以考虑1分组织结构点。

通篇型文章单一、词汇不足的人，即使没有语法错误，一般也不会划分组织结构。

分类写作概述

一、事件介绍类

第一段：

(1)I ' m pleased to know that you ' re greatly interested in.so I'd like to share a piece of goo

d news that there will be a ... .Now,let me offer you some useful information.

(2) It's my great honor to invite you to enter a ... .Now,let me offer you some useful information about it.

(3) It's time for us to say goodbye to our school life is a/an... prepared for us.Now,let me offer you some information about it.

主体段：

1.时间&地点：The ... will be held in Classroom 302 at 3 o'clock in the afternoon on June 8th,2019.

2.内容：

(1)主题句：There will be various meaningful activities included in it.

(2)要点:First of all，You will be invited to .../You will be given a chance to ... .which will ...

After that,It will be more than interesting for you to .../It will impress you a lot to ... so that ...

At last,doing sth. will play an important part in ... .So ...

尾段：

That's all.I firmly believe that if you join in it,you will ... .

That's all.I sincerely hope that you can come and share the happiness/fun with us.

二、写人叙事类

首段：

(1) 朋友：A friend in need is a friend indeed.I have a friend just like that who often offers me much warmth in my life. Let me introduce him to you.

(2) 父母：If you ask me who is the most important one to me,without doubt,the answer is my ... . Let me introduce him to you .

(3) 老师：In both my life and study,my ... teacher is special to me because he is not only my teacher but also my friend who has made a great difference to my character.

主体段：

1.外貌：... is very beautiful but a little fat with long hair and big eyes.

2.性格：...is an outgoing woman who always gets along well with people around her./ ... is very kind to others and easy to get on with./is so ready to help others that we all like to make friends with him.

3.爱好：She is especially good at cooking and often cooks different delicious foods for me.

4.事例：

（1）Linda is like an angel. Whenever I meet trouble, she will always be there. When I fail my test, She always encourages me to face the fact bravely and then tries to help me to check the reason why I fail. At the same time, she shares her good ways of studying with me.

（2）My Chinese teacher, Ms Li, not only teaches us how to learn, but also teaches us how to be a person. I remember I made a serious mistakes in Grade seven, that was to copy others' homework. Ms Li knew that. Instead of being angry with me, she told me the importance of study and encouraged me to study hard to become a talented person in the future.

（3）Last term, I failed my exam. I was so that that I cried sadly in my room. When my mother came from work late, she talked with me patiently and cheered me up. That evening, when I woke up at night, my mother was still working. I was deeply moved. Then I made up my mind to study harder than before.

尾段：

As a sunshine teenager, Xiao Hui is a good example for us to learn from./I will treasure the friendship forever.

Now I understand my father's love to me. I will never forget what my father did for me and try my best to make him pleased.

He is an excellent teacher I will never forget and love him forever.

三、咨询建议类

首段：

I'm sorry to hear that you have difficulty in doing ... .Don't worry about it!Here are some useful suggestions I 'd like to share with you.

主体段：

1.主题句：Actually,if you are careful, you'll find various simple ways to help you solve the problem.

2.要点：

First and foremost,It's adj/n. for/of sb. to do ... .So that...

In addition,you are supposed to do ... ,which can not only ... but also ...

What's more,you had better (not) do ... ,because ...

Last but not least,I suggest you (should) do ... ,from which,you're able to do ...

尾段：

With these suggestions carried out,I firmly believe you will improve ... a lot.

I sincerely hope that my suggestions can be of great forward to your earliest reply.

四、观点看法类

首段：

With the development of the science and technology/society,...is becoming more and more serious./the problem about ... is under a heated discussion/ ... has become a hot for that,There are different opinions among people.

主体段：

On the one hand, some people hold the idea that ... .The reasons are as , ... .Second, ... .Last, ... .

On the other hand,others di suppose that ... .Because ... .More importantly, ... .

尾段：

As far as I'm concerned,every coin has two sides,and ... is not a n exce long as we treat ... properly,it will be of great help.

中考作文经典词句

一、常用的名言警句

1. Actions speak louder than words. 事实胜于雄辩.

2. A friend in need is a friend indeed. 患难朋友才是真朋友.

3. Where there is a will, there is a way. 有志者事竟成.

4. All roads lead to Rome. 条条大道通罗马.

5. Every man has his weak side. 人人都有缺点?

6. Failure is the mother of success. 失败是成功之母?

7. Nothing in the world is difficult if you set your mind to it. 世上无难事,只怕有心人。

8. A life without a friend is a life without a sun. 人若无友,就如同生命中没有太阳。

9. All things are difficult before they are easy. 万事开头难。

10. Always prepare for a rainy day. 未雨绸缪。

11. Practice makes perfect.熟能生巧。

12. Bad news has wings. 好事不出门,坏事传千里。

13. You have to believe in yourself. That's the secret of success. 你必须相信自己,这是成功的关键。

14. Don't judge a man by his looks. 不可以貌取人。

二、常用过渡语

1. 表起始的过渡语:first of all, to begin with, first and foremost等。

2. 表时间的过渡语:first, at first, then, later, in the end, finally, afterwards, after that, since then, for the first time, at last, as soon as, the next moment, meanwhile, later on, soon, 等。

3. 表空间的过渡语:on the right/left, to the right/left of, on one side of…on the other side of…, at the foot/top/end of, in the middle/centre of, next to, far from, in front of等.

4. 表因果的过渡语:for, since,as,because of, thus, so, as a result (of)等.

5. 表转折的过渡语:but, yet, however, after all, in fact, while, on the contrary, instead of, although, otherwise, in spite of等。

6. 表列举的过渡语:for example, such as, like, as follows, in other words, and so on等。

7. 表推进的过渡语:on one hand… on the other hand…, in addition to, as well, still, also, in other words, not only…but also…, besides, in addition,furthermore, what's more, moreover等.

8. 表总结的过渡语:in short, in a word, in general, in brief, in all, all in all,above all等.

三、常用句型

1.重点句型

1). It's adj for sb to do 做…对某人来说…

2). …so … that … 如此… 以至于… …too … to do 太… 而不能… such … that … 如此… 以至于…

3). not…until… 直到…才…

例: I didn't go to bed until my mother came back.

4).The reason why 句子 is that 句子 … 的原因是…

The reason why he got angry was that she told him a lie. ( 他生气的原因是她对他说了谎。)

5). That is why 句子 那是…的原因

6). That is because 句子 那是因为…

7). It is said that 句子 据说… It is reported that 句子 据报道…

8). There is no doubt that 句子 毫无疑问…

9). It goes without saying that 句子 不言而喻，毫无疑问

10). There is no need to do没必要做…

11). There is no point in doing 做某事毫无意义

2. 提建议

had better (not) do 最好(不)做

It's adj./n. of/for sb. to do

I suggest that you (should) do 我建议你做…

be supposed to do 应该做

If I were you, I would do…我要是你的话，我会做…

Don't forget to do=Remember to do...

Why not do / why don't you do…? 为什么不…

How about / what about doing …怎么样?

3. 表示喜欢和感兴趣

like / love doing=enjoy doing=be fond of doing 喜欢做…

prefer to do A rather than do B 宁愿做A也不愿做B

be interested in doing = show/ take great interest in n./ doing ... 感兴趣

4. .努力做…

try to do努力做… try one's best to do= do one's best to do 竭尽全力做…

make efforts to do = make every effort to do 尽力做…

do what sb can (do ) to do 尽力做…

spare no effort to do 不遗余力的做…

do what / everything sb. can to do 尽某人全力做…

5. 打算做… / 计划做…

intend / plan to do 打算做… be going to do 打算/计划做…

decide to do 决定做… determine to do决定做…

make up one's mind to do下定决心做…

6. 表示想/希望

want to do = would like to do 想做…

hope/wish to do 希望做… expect to do 期待着做…

desire to do=have a great desire to do

7. 只加doing作宾语的动词

finish / keep / practice / suggest / allow / consider / mind / miss / avoid / imagine / enjoy doing

固定搭配

look forward to doing 盼望做…keep on doing 坚持做…dream of doing 梦想做…

can't help doing 情不自禁地做… keep / stop / prevent sb. from doing 阻止某人做…

be busy (in ) doing be busy with 名词 忙于做…

spend time / money (in )doing spend time / money on 名词 花费时间做…

have fun / have a good time / enjoy oneself doing 玩得开心