【高中感悟作文英语作文】高考提示作文55 Experiences on a Part-time Job

unit 55 experiences on a part-time job

你是中学生。假期里自己有打工的经验。开学初期，你在英语课上用英语向同学讲述你的体验。请试试给定的词组，写100个单词左右的短文。

1.keep on asking parents for money

2.learn the value of money

3.get along with others

4.get a little working and social experience

短文的开头已经为你写好了。

now adays it is not unusual for a student to find a part-time job . in the past winter holiday，I worked as a waiter at a McDonald's

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“范文”

nowadaysit is not unusual for a student to find a part-time job。 in the past winter holiday，I worked as a waiter at a McDonald's

I used tokeep on asking parents for money。that was the first time thatI had earned money，So I was quite excited . now I can buy whatever I need without asking others for money . from my workiiwhat's more，I ' ve got a little working and social experience . it ' s good food

注释：请参见

nowadays:现在，现在(经常用于将现在的习惯等与过去进行比较)

兼职工作：是业余工作

at a MeDonald's:在麦当劳餐厅

used to do:过去经常这样做。

keep on doing parents for money:一直在向父母要钱。Ask sb for sth:向某人索要某物)

that's the first time that.that子句要写成完成式

the value of money:金钱的价值

get along with others:与他人相处

in a word:不管怎样

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这是根据英语短语内容提示展开的议论文。本文探讨了中学生参加暑假社会实践的当今社会的热点话题。

根据题目中给出的短语，作者准确地把握了内容之间的关联性，如沉浸感，准确地表达了特定环境下特定人物的体会。

文章中作者使用了对比法，“used to……”罗过去总是向父亲伸手要钱。转为Now目前的情况，作为兼职收入，再也不用伸手要钱了。因此，作家深有感触。从工作经验中，自己不仅知道了钱的价值，还学会了与人相处，还获得了一些工作和社会经验。最后，作者认为这对未来有好处，这段经历使他非常愉快。这是作者自己添加的内容，全文也是很好的总结，一定很合适。

值得注意的是，文章结构完整、紧凑、层次分明、文章流畅、转换自然、要点全面，特别是作者采用了对比法，过去和现在的对比准确地反映在时态中。

资料来源：英语作文高分必须丛书：高考/李华传主编，武汉大学出版社，2005年。