7复习写作
写作策略:
1.优秀的写作结构:要使用三段式,要有开头、正文和结尾。
733526702.优秀的写作要求:1。审议严格,结构完整。
733526702.条理分明。例如:可以使用顺序词或连接词。)
780210 363.文章没有错,逻辑性强。
文章多样,变化丰富。用词正确,意思表达不牵强。
请恰当地使用谚语或漂亮的句子。
780210 363.优秀的作文写作程序:1)审议构想,初步确定三段内容。
2)在不遗漏重要信息的情况下背诵和应用固定句子。
780210 363)一两个漂亮的句子结束设计。
4)重新阅读检查,以确保没有错误。
往年调整试卷真题。
07-08)如果你是新来的学生李刚,请介绍一下你的个人情况,包括姓名、年龄、联系方式、个人爱好、理由等。
要求:句子流畅,语法正确,50个单词左右。
开始:海洛,埃布里温!My name is Li Gang .
结束:This is me。How about you?
can you write and tell me about your self?
Would you like to be my friend?
Do you want to make friends with me?
或者使用最后一个复杂的句型。
If you want to make friends with me,you can call me at 1234567。/
please send an e-mail to me . my e-mail address is ABC @。
正文:my name is.I'm.years old。
I like.best.my favorite coloris.because I think.
我的favorite food is.and.for dinner,I like.and.
In the subjects I have at school,I like.best.because the.teacher is.
My telephone number is 1234567 .
锦上添花:As for sports、I like . best。
In my free time,I like playing basketball . I think that ' 197492 good for my health。
The.teacher is so wise that he always makes his class interesting and lively .
2008-2009年
你认识自己的父母吗?你知道他们的生日、爱好、爱好吗?请以我父母为主题写50个单词左右的短文。
启动:my father/mother is a worker . he is a _ _ _ _ _ man。
禁球:I think my fathe is the greatest father in the world。
结束:I love my father . we are a happy family . how about your father?
禁球:I love my parents . they give me so much love。
正文: my father is a _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _。his birthday is _ _ _ _ _ _ _。
Although he is very busy,he often plays _ _ _ _ _ _ _ on weekend。
because his favourite sport is _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _。he alsolikes _ _ _ _ _ _ _。
my mother is a _ _ _ _ _ _ _。she was born on _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _。
she likes doing _ _ _ _ _ _ in her free time。
sheco oks well . sheoften cooks lots of healty food food for me。
2010-2011年
亲爱的同学,你的日常生活怎么样?以“my day”为题写一篇英语短文,向大家介绍你一天的生活。
要求:1短文中不能出现真实姓名、学校名称。
2字数:6031,3134163931个单词
开始:Do you want to know about my day?我的名字is My name is ____。I'm a middle sch
ool student. I go to school on weekdays.结尾:It’s my day. How about your day?
锦句: What a busy day I have!
正文: My day
Today is _____. It’s my favorite day. Because I have _______ on ________ .
I usually get up at around six-thirty.
I brush my teeth and have a shower.
Then I ___________ . What a funny time to __________!
After breakfast, I take the number ______bus to school with my classmate.
I have classes all day. But I eat lunch at twelve o’clock in the school .
At __________ ,I do my homework. At nine o’clock, I finish my classes.
习作评析:
优秀作文的标准你掌握了吗?我们一起来做评卷老师,看看这些习作能得多少分吧!你能让它们更符合优秀作文的标准吗?
Myself
Hello ,everyone. My name is Li Gang. I am happy to be here. I am 13 years old. I like playing basketball and volleyball. Because it’s good for my health. I often play basketball and volleyball with my friends. And I have lots of healthy food. I like fruit. Strawberries and oranges are my favorite. My favorite color is blue. If you want to make friends with me, you can call me at 123.
My parents
My father is a worker. He often goes to work at seven o’clock. His birthday is August eighth. He likes to play basketball. He often watchs TV at home in his free. He works very hard. I love him. My mother is a worker too. Her birthday is july first. She likes shopping and watching TV. She likes Beijing Opera. She cooks well. She goes shopping with me. I love her too.
My day
Well, I usually get up at around six-thirty. I brush my teeth and have a shower. Then I eat my breakfast. What a funny time to est breakfast! After breakfast, I take the number 10 bus to school with my classmate. I have classes all day. But I eat lunch at twelve o’clock in the school . At seven o’clock,I do my homework. At nine o’clock, I finish my classes. My mother take me home.
七上作文话题:
一.介绍某人的房间。Unit 3
开头:This is sb’s bedroom. / Welcome to sb’s room./ Look! This is sb’s room.
结尾:Can you tell me about your room?
How about your room?
正文:You can see a 。。。, a 。。。 and a … in it.
The desk is 。。。.
Some books are on the desk and her bag is on the desk, too.
Under the bed, you can see her white shoes.
On the bed there are some clothes. Her red sweater is on it.
There is a …+ 介词短语。 There are …+ 介词短语。
常用介短: On the sofa, under the bed, between the bookcase and the TV, near the window, behind the door, on the wall, etc.
二. 介绍某人的家庭/家庭照片。Unit 3
开头:Look, this is my family photo. / Do you want to know about my family?
结尾: This is my family. / I think I have a happy family./ Oh, what a happy family I have!/ How about your family?
正文:There are 6 people in my family. They are my grandparents, my parents , my aunt and I .
My mother is a …. She is very busy. And my father is a …. He likes ….
锦句:My grandparents needn’t work. They retire at home.
三.介绍家人的运动爱好和运动品收藏。Unit 5
开头:… is my aunt/uncle/ father. And my … is a teacher. We all like sports.
Sb has a great / small sports collection.
结尾: We think doing sports is good for our health.
How about you? Do you like sports? Do you have a sports collection? / What kind of sport do you like best?
正文:
Sb has a great sports collection.
He has ten … balls and nine ….balls.
He plays … with sb every day. / He doesn’t play sports, he only watches them on TV!
Sb also has a sports collection.
She likes Yao Ming very much.
四.介绍你的健康饮食。Unit 6
开头:Hello! My name is Paul. I eat lots of healthy food every day./
锦句:Do you care about your health? Do you eat healthy food every day?
结尾:I don’t eat too much junk food. I think it’s bad for our health.
正文: I eat… and … for breakfast. For lunch, I eat some ….
I like … and … for dinner. And for dessert, … .
五.为商店写一份促销广告。Unit 7
开头:Hello, boys and girls! I am a clerk at Mr Cool’s Clothes Store.
Come and have a look at …store. We have a big sale!
结尾:Everybody can afford our prices!
锦句: Don’t miss it! Come and see for yourself at … store.
正文:We have _____ in colors for 3 dollars.
We have ______ at a very good price—only …yuan.
The blue _____ are 7 dollars.
The whit _______ are on sale for 6 dollars.
For boys, we have _____ for ..yuan each.
A pair of ______ is only 1 dollar.
We also sell ________for only 18 dollars.
六. 介绍一下你喜爱的电影和影星。Unit 9
开头:Do you like movies? I like movies very much.
锦句:In my free time, I often go to the movies. I think it’s a good way to relax myself.
结尾:Why not go to the movies ! let’s go to the movies together!
正文:
I often go to movies with______. We like movies very much.
I like ______ . I think they are ______.
But _____ doesn’t like them. He thinks they are ______.
He likes _______. He thinks _________.
My favorite movie star is_________. He is a great actor.
My favorite movie is____________. It’s a very successful comedy.
___’s favorite actor is________. He is a great actor.
____ thinks his___________ is very exciting. It’s an action movie.
_______ wants to be an action movie actor one day .
七.介绍某人的一天。Unit 11
开头:….is a ____ . Every day she is very busy.
结尾:What a busy/ happy day it is!
正文:
She has four classes in the morning and two in the afternoon.
She gets to school at ________in the morning and she has lunch at home.
School is over at _______ in the afternoon.
She often does sth. after school. Then at around 5:00, she gets home.
She eats supper at____. And she does her homework form 7:00 to 8:00.
Then she ___________ for an hour.
At __________, she goes to bed.
八. 介绍你最喜欢的科目./ 你最喜欢的上学日。Unit 12
开头语:1.The subjects we have at school are ___________.… is my favorite subject.
2.We have many subjects at school. In these subjects, I like …best.
3. I like Monday best. Because I have ….on Monday.
结尾:What’s your favorite day /subject?
正文:
1.The subjects we have at school are ___________.
2. My favorite subject is … because it’s ______________.
3. I have … on________________.
4. I like … because the teacher is ….
点睛句:The … teacher is so wise that he always makes the class_________________.
5. In this class we can _______________ .
九.书信的格式:
很多作文题目要求我们用书信的格式表达观点,你知道书信的格式是什么吗?
称呼:顶格写,Dear …,
开头:空两格,Thanks for your letter. /Do you want to know about my ….?
结束语:I hope you can write and tell me about your …./ Best wishes to you.
Write to me soon.
落款: Yours, Your sincerely, Your friend, Love, 落款要放在右下角。人名要大写。
小小习作几篇:我们一起来评一下这些作文吧!它们符合优秀作文的要求吗?
一. 介绍某人的房间。Unit 3
This is my sister’s bedroom.
You can see a desk, a bed and a chair in it. The desk is under the window. The chair is next to the desk. Some books are on the desk and her bag is on the desk, too. Under the bed you can see her white shoes. Some pictures are on the wall. The wall is blue. There’s a clock on the wall, too. It’s ten to five now. On the bed there are some clothes. Her red sweater is on it. My sister isn’t at home now.
二. 介绍你的家庭;家庭照片。
There are six people in my family. They are my grandparents, my parents, my sister and I.
My father is a doctor. He is 40 years old. My mother is a housewife. She is a year younger than my father. She is busy with the housework every day. My sister and I are students. We are in the same school. She’s in Grade Nine and I’m in Grade Seven.
What do my grandparents do? They needn’t work. They retire at home. We’re a happy family.
三. 介绍你的叔叔Jim Green的运动爱好和运动品收藏。Unit 5
Jim Green is my uncle. He is an English teacher. And he is a sports fan. He has a great sports collection. He has ten soccer balls and nine volleyballs. He plays soccer with his students every day.
His daughter Linda is a sports fan, too. She also has sports collection. She has two tennis rackets and three basketballs. In the morning she plays tennis with her mother. And in the afternoon she plays basketball with her friends. She likes Yao Ming very much.
四 .介绍你的健康饮食。Unit 6
Hello! My name is Paul. I am an English boy and I am eight years old. I eat lots of healthy food every day.
I eat eggs and bananas for breakfast. For lunch, I eat some vegetables. I like strawberries and pears foe dinner. I like playing sports. I play ping-pong every afternoon. I like green. I have green pens and green shirts.
Would you like to be my friend?
五、 假设你是Cool先生服装店的店员,为店里写一份促销广告。Unit 7
Hello, boys and girls! My name is Zhang Hanyun, and my English name is Selina Zhang. I am a clerk at Mr Cool’s Clothes Store.
We have shorts in black and white for 3 dollars. We have shirts in blue, black and white. The blue shirts are 7 dollars. The black shirts are also 7 dollars. The white shirts are on sale for 6 dollars. For boys, we have white socks. A pair of white socks is only 1 dollar. We also sell black shoes for only 18 dollars.
Come and see for yourself at Mr Cool’s Clothes Store.
六. 介绍一下你喜爱的电影和影星。Unit 9
My name is Ben. I often go to movies with my friend, Tom. We like movies very much. I like comedies. I think they are funny. But Tom doesn’t like them. He thinks they are boring. He likes action movies. He thinks they are exciting. My favorite movie star is Paul Jackson. He is a great actor. My favorite movie is his My Father’s Birthday. It’s a very successful comedy. Tom’s favorite actor is Jackie Chan. He is a great actor. Tom thinks his Bush Hour is very exciting. It’s an action movie. Tom wants to be an action movie actor.
七.介绍Sonia的一天。Unit 11
Sonia is an American girl. Every day she is very busy.
She has four classes in the morning and two in the afternoon. She gets to school at eight o’clock in the morning and she has lunch at home. School is over at four o’clock in the afternoon. She often plays football after school. Then at around 5:00, she gets home. She eats supper at 6:15. And she does her homework form 7:00 to 8:00. Then she watches TV for an hour. At nine o’clock, she goes to bed.
She really has a busy day.
八.介绍你最喜欢的上学日。Unit 12
Hello, my name is Lin Tao. My favorite days are Monday and Wednesday because I have P.E. those days. My P.E. teacher is Mr Green. He is fun and his classes are interesting and relaxing, so we all like him. It’s Wednesday, November 11th today. At 8:30, I have math. I don’t like math. Then at 9:00 I have science. It’s difficult but interesting. I have P.E. at 10:00. That’s my favorite subject. I have at 12:00. After lunch, I have music. I like my music teacher, Mr Brown. He’s fun.
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