【校园生活高中英语作文】CET-6命题作文' Our School Days

[CET-6命题作文] Make the Most of Our School Days

directions : for this part，you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic make the

most of our school days . your composition should be at least 160 words。

[范文]

Make the Most of Our School Days

almost one-fourth of our lifetime is spent in school . there we are preparing for our future and our duty for society . meanwhile 1、Wemake our life-long

We go to school，not only to be educated，but to adjust ourselves for our school is a society in miniature。our class mates are of different So we begin to learn human nature early . thus it enables us to handle relationships between different kinds of people LLE

some of us tend to go to extremes: either we are too fond of studies And become a bookworm or we are fully occupied by off-campus activities the compus

let ' s make less mistakes but more delight fulexperiences while in school .

[注释]

同时Meanwhile:

微型：小型

natures:自然

Extra Curricular Activities :课外活动

stepping-stone:前进的楼梯

go to extremes:走向极端

波萨克：放弃

delightful:幸福

[简评]

这是根据命题完成的议论文。

在第一段中，作者以因果法得出了结论。学校时期是我们人生中的重要时期。第二段用列举法说明，我们不仅要接受教育，还要调整自己以适应学校这个小社会。学校提供各种课外活动，使我们逐渐走向社会。学校也有助于我们培养清晰健康的心灵。第三段，作者首先用比较法说明了两所学校的极端倾向。也就是说，只参与书虫和课外活动，不学习，分析各自的优缺点。然后作者提出了自己的看法：we should standin the middle of these two extremes。也就是说，要努力学习，积极参加课外活动。最后，作者呼吁let ' s make less mistakes but more delight ful experience while in school。

本文与命题密切相关，重点突出，主题明确，长句的合理运用使问题论述得更加清晰透彻。

资料来源：新大学英语四、六级考点透视丛书：六级作文/李华传主编，武汉大学出版社，2006年。