【大学英语四第四单元作文】大学英语四级作文经典范文(2)

enhance awareness to guard against campus thefts

1.校园盗窃案时有发生

2.东西被偷的原因

学生如何加强防盗意识

沈帝概述

这是一篇论述校园物品失窃和防盗意识的文章。第一段主要陈述校园盗窃案发生的情况。第二段主要分析校园物品被盗的原因。第三段主要说明学生如何加强防盗意识。

[范文]

enhance awareness to guard against campus thefts

" if you don ' t want to wake up and find you have no pants to wear，you ' d better put them on in sleep " goes a popular joke among studes Campus

what makes students the easy targets？The reasons are not hard to find . but I believe of all these reasons，The lack of anti-theft alertness is The most important . for lack The students The

in order to minimize possible losses，The students must stay on guard in The first place，As awareness of The thefts around often makes a big digin addition，it ' s advisable to develop a neighbourhood watch

第一个想法评论：描述校园盗窃案发生的情况。

语言点提示：it seems that这个句型代表可能性

回顾事故的第二段：说明盗窃的原因。

语言点提示：

(1)what makes students the easy targets？这篇文章引用如下

(2)防theft alertness防盗识别

(3)lack of alertness缺乏警惕

(4)光手指小偷。

回顾第三段思想：说明如何加强防盗意识。

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◇语言点提示：注意关联词语in the first place，Besides，In addition的使用可使行文更富逻辑性。

How Will Our Life Go on without Internet?

1. 网络提供给了人们丰富多彩和便捷的生活

2. 很多人开始感觉离开网络寸步难行

3. 你对网络依赖症的看法

● 审题概述●

本文是一篇论述你对网络与人们生活关系的文章。第一段，侧重简述网络给人们生活的多彩、便利。第二段，详述网络与人们生活的紧密度。第三段，论述对网络依赖的观点。

【范文一】

How Will Our Life Go on without Internet?

If asked whether the Internet is the greatest discovery of the 20th century, my answer would be yes. The Internet has drawn the world closer together, realized countless incredible dreams, and provided modern people with a great many conveniences and a brilliant life.
Today, many people simply feel they cannot live without the Internet. Governments publish their latest policies and decisions online for worldwide recognition. Political campaigns are often done online to gain wider public support. Companies and enterprises resort to the Internet for more business opportunities and potential customers home and abroad. Universities and researchers turn to the Internet if they’d seek international cooperation or funding. Common folks like us also rely on the cyber world in various ways, for communication, entertainment, banking and shopping.
True, the power of the Internet is all pervasive and its many negative effects are already visible. For example, Internet addicts tend to withdraw to their own fantasy world rather than communicate with a real person. Children are exposed to online pornography and violence. Internet frauds are an everyday occurrence. In view of all this, you are advised to use the Internet with wisdom. Keep it at a safe distance and never lose yourself.

◇第一段思路点评：综述网络给人们生活带来的多彩和便捷。两个长句足矣。第一句用if引导的条件句引出“网络”话题，第二句概述网络带给多彩和便捷的生活。

◇语言点提示：

has drawn…, realized, and provided此为谓语连动式的运用。

◇第二段思路点评：详述网络与人们生活的紧密关系，先总述，后分述。

◇语言点提示：

resort to借助、诉诸、求助于

◇第三段思路点评：先陈述人们对网络的依赖，再谈对此的看法。

◇语言点提示：

（1）negative effects副作用、反面作用

（2）addicts成瘾者、依恋者

（3）fantasy world虚拟世界、虚幻世界

（4）pornography色情表演、色情作品

（5）fraud欺骗、诈骗

【范文二】

As a primary source of information as well as an efficient means of communication, the Internet offers people a colourful and convenient life. Just by clicking the mouse, we can enjoy a brilliant and easy life that could not be achieved ever before: shopping, making friends, contacting relatives, looking for jobs, downloading music and movies, conducting business deals, and freely airing our opinions.
For its convenience, the Internet has attracted people like magnets and some people even claim that it is indispensable. To them, life can’t go on without it. Every day millions of people spend hours on end surfing the Internet. They are obsessed with it so much so that they forget many other important matters.
As for me, I don’t approve of unrestrained Internet reliance. Although the Internet is a gift of the technological revolution and a blessing of this information age, we should never let it control our life. The Internet absolutely doesn’t mean the whole world to us. Instead, we should guard against its negative effects. To those Internet addicts, I would add: “Self-control can make or break your life. With proper use, the Internet serves you; otherwise, it kills you.”

Craze for Civil Service Examinations
　

1. 现在有越来越多的大学毕业生报考公务员

2. 引起此现象的原因

3. 你的看法

● 审题概述●
　　本文是一篇主要论述大学生报考公务员增多的原因和对此看法的文章。第一段，主要综述大学生报考公务员增多的现象。第二段，侧重分析引起此现象的原因。第三段，重点谈你对此的观点。

　　【范文】

　　Craze for Civil Service Examinations

　　Every year hundreds of thousands of people in China take civil service exams conducted at various levels in the hope of becoming government employees. Among them, college graduates are a fast-growing force that can’t be ignored. The craze for being a civil servant is not limited to liberal arts majors, as it’s also gaining popularity among science and engineering students.
　　In the final analysis, this growing trend among the youngsters is mainly attributable to two factors – ambitions and comforts. On the one hand, many ambitious college graduates view these exams as a springboard to a higher social status, greater power and prestige, on which many of their other wishes rest. On the other, as being a civil servant generally means a stable income, enviable healthcare and pension programmes, as well as other comforts of life, it’s quite an appealing career option to many people, especially in this age of sluggish world economy.
　　Personally, the desire to be a government official is beyond reproach, as the nation and the people do need an injection of new blood into the civil service sectors. The fresh-faced college graduates, armed with lofty ideals, new vision, and strong drive, are undoubtedly among the best candidates.

◇第一段思路点评：第一句总述人们蜂拥参加公务员招考，第二句点明大学生是其中的主力军，第三句再述热衷于公务员报考的大学生不仅有文科的，还有理工科的。

◇语言点提示：

liberal arts majors文科专业学生

◇第二段思路点评：先总述引起大学生热衷报考公务员的两点因素，再详细分述。

◇语言点提示：

（1）On the one hand…On the other起到衔接上文作用

（2）is attributable to归因于

（3）sluggish world economy衰退的世界经济

◇第三段思路点评：重点谈对大学生热衷报考公务员的观点。

◇语言点提示：beyond reproach无可厚非来源:考试大-英语四级

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