【高中英语万能续写作文环境描写】全国新高考英语作文|阅读和续写的美景(环境心理)的详细描述

《读后续书》是一种新的高考英语题型，对学生的语言综合运用能力的考查要求更高。要写生动的形象和具体的续写部分，不仅要词汇量丰富，还要注意语言生动详细的描述，这样才能写高分。

今天，高中英语研究中心为学生和老师总结了关于动作、心理和环境的详细描述材料。

一、环境描写的素材

环境描写分为客观和主观两个角度。客观从环境事物本身开始，主观从观察者的角度描述。通常在描述时，主观和客观地交替进行，主观描述的比重稍大。

客观环境描写3360

01

环境描写

要求：声音、颜色、质感、味道(adj)

蓝天蓝天

The songs of birds鸟鸣

The thundering clouds闪电打雷

The fragile flowers娇嫩的花朵

德克，莱恩埃文灵雨夜。

The green grass池

The fragrant roses美丽的玫瑰

The setting/rising sun日落/冉冉升起的太阳.

要求：环境说明中的verb (vi/vt)

首先，风(blow/click/howl/wail/roar)

1.a gust of windblew and parted the drooping branches of the weeping willow like a curtain

2.the wind，soft and cold，clicked through tree branches and stirred the bushes that sprinkled the slope。风，轻，冷，轻轻拍打树枝。

3.a cool breeze blew through the quiet park。凉爽的微风吹过寂静的公园。

4.a cold breeze wafted through my hair。(寒风掠过我的头。）

The windwas perfect for kite flying，blowing just hard enough to give some lift。

今天是放风筝的好天气。强风把风筝拉了上来。)。

二、水

(flow/travel/move/meander/enter)

[声音]

1.at one point，the faint sound of water tumbling through the valley。

某个地方潺潺的水声在山谷里回响。

[颜色]

2.the water was deep blue and sunlight glittered on its looking glass-clear surface。水是深蓝色的，太阳在透明的玻璃表面闪闪发光。

3.a little way off was a small brook，rushing and sparkling along between绿色银行。不远处有一条小溪，在绿色河岸之间猛烈地发光。

4.it murmured in a soft voice like a little innocent girl whispered to her loving mother(action、sound和colour)

三、天空(标准/appear/turn)

1.the sky was a curdled gray burdened with lumps of clouds。

天空是深灰色的，伴随着拥挤的朵朵云

2.蓝色斯基斯斯托德塔朗far蓝天巍然耸立

主观环境描写3360

1.Sb found sth adj/doing/done有人发现了什么(状态/动作/躲避).

2.SBSAW/HEARD/FELT/SMELT STH DOING/DONE某人看到、听到、感觉到、闻到某物(状态/动作/血液

3.It was so adj that we find/feel这就是.所以

4.Sth kept sb spellbound/amazed/风景让我如此陶醉/惊讶/

Sth held sb entirely in their power风景完全吓到我了

5.it looked/seemed/appeared/felt like.风景就像.

02

场景描述的材质

原作：中追风筝的人。

1.at least two dozen kites already hung I

n the sky, like paper sharks roaming for prey. Within an hour, the number doubled, and red, blue, and yellow kites glided and spun

in the sky. A cold breeze wafted through my hair. The wind was perfect for kite flying, blowing just hard enough to give some lift, make the sweeps easier.

(放风筝的场景描写,从各个角度,立体描述)

空中已经挂着至少二十来只风筝,如同纸制的鲨鱼,巡游搜猎食物。不到一个钟头,这个数字翻了一番,红色的、蓝色的、黄色的风筝在苍穹来回飞舞,熠熠生辉。寒冷的微风吹过我的头发。这风正适宜放风筝,风速不大,恰好能让风筝飘浮起来,也便于操控。

2.The water was a deep blue and sunlight glittered on its looking glass-clear surface. 湖水澄蓝,波平如镜,阳光照在湖上熠熠生辉。

3. Then I glanced up and saw a pair of kites, red with long blue tails, soaring in the sky. They danced high above the trees on the west end of the park, over the windmills, floating side by side like a pair of eyes looking down on San Francisco, the city I now call home. (场景、比喻)

我抬起头,望见两只红色的风筝,带着长长的蓝色尾巴,在天空中冉冉升起。它们舞动着,飞越公园西边的树林,飞越风车,并排飘浮着,如同一双眼睛俯视着旧金山,这个我现在当成家园的城市。

4. Blue skies stood tall and far, the sun l ike a branding iron searing the back of your neck. Creeks where Hassan and I skipped stones all spring turned dry, and rickshaws stirred dust when they sputtered by.(场景、比喻)

天空一碧如洗,阳光像烙铁般灼痛后颈。整个春天我和哈桑在溪流打水漂,到了夏天它们也干涸了。黄包车嗒嗒走过,扬起阵阵灰尘。

5. Somewhere, a branch snapped, an owl hooted. The wind, soft and cold, clicked

through tree branches and stirred the bushes that sprinkled the slope. And from below, the faint sound of water tumbling through the valley.

在某个地方传来树枝劈啪作响的声音,还有猫头鹰的叫声。寒风微微拂动树枝,吹过山坡上的灌木丛。而下面,水流在山谷淌动,传来阵阵微弱的声音。

6. By three o'clock, the rain had stopped and the sky was a curdled gray burdened with lumps of clouds. A cool breeze blew through the park.(天气)

到三点时,雨停了,铅灰色的天空阴云密布,一阵寒风吹过公园。

7. The sun was beginning to set, glittering red through the cracks between the ramshackle buildings.(景象)

太阳开始下山,那些摇摇欲坠的房子的裂缝中,渗出闪闪的红色斜晖。

03

描写动作,心理和情感

开心

My heart is full of joy.

我的心里乐开了花。

My heart is as sweet as honey.

我心里像喝了蜜一样，甜滋滋的。

The surface of the calm lake stirred the waves, and my mood was as cheerful as a wave.

平静的湖面激起了浪花，我的心情也像浪花一样欢腾。

I couldn’t restrain my joy and jumped into the house.

我抑制不住内心的喜悦，蹦蹦跳跳地进了家门。

We were very pleased to hear this encouraging news.

听到这个令人鼓舞的消息，我们十分高兴。

He was delighted to receive such impressive recognition for his achievements.

他的成就获得大家的认可，他很开心。

悲伤

be in tears 含泪

have tears in one’s eyes　眼里含着泪水

burst into tears 放声大哭，突然哭起来

fight back tears 抑制住泪水

be close to tears 快要哭了

He stood silently, tears rolling down his cheeks.

他静静地站着，眼泪顺着面颊流了下来。

I feel like I am floating in an ocean of sadness.

我感觉正漂浮在悲伤的海洋里。

Her hands were shaking. She was on the verge of tears.

她的手在颤抖。她快要哭了。

It was a time of great sorrow.

这是一个非常悲伤的时刻。

Words cannot express my sorrow.

言语无法表达我的哀伤。

As he looked at Katherine, great sorrow clouded his eyes.

他看着凯瑟琳，满眼忧伤。

Their reunion after a long separation brought mixed feelings of joy and sorrow to them both.

两人久别重逢，悲喜交加。

This article brought back sad memories for me.

这篇文章使我想起了伤心的往事。

Separation from his friends made him sad.

与朋友们分离使他伤心。

愤怒

fly off the handle 勃然大怒

lose one’s temper 发脾气

His anger has cooled.

他的怒气平息了。

He was tongue-tied with anger. His hands trembled and he shouted for half a day.

他气得张口结舌，两只手直颤抖，大喊大叫了半天。

Ellen felt both despair and anger at her mother.

埃伦对她的母亲感到既绝望又生气。

We expressed our disappointment, hurt and anger in the clearest possible way.

我们清楚明白地表达了我们的失望、伤心和愤怒。

Andy’s face paled with disappointment; perhaps with anger as well.

安迪的脸色由于失望而变得苍白，也许还掺杂着气愤。

He is just mad at me because I don’t want to go.

因为我不想去，他就对我火冒三丈。

I’m sorry I struck you. I didn't mean to. It’s just that I was so mad.

很抱歉我打了你。我不是有意的，只不过我当时气极了。

Then she stood up, wrapping her coat around her angrily.

然后她站了起来，怒气冲冲地穿上大衣。

She looked at him with eyes flashing angrily.

她愤怒地看着他。

恐惧

She was too frightened to tell her family what had happened.

她太害怕了，不敢告诉家人发生了什么事。

In a way, I suppose I’m frightened of failing.

我想我有点惧怕失败。

His heart was pounding, as if he were frightened.

他的心怦怦跳，似乎被吓坏了。

I was frightened, but excited at the same time.

我既害怕又兴奋。

Liza was so frightened that she couldn’t make a sound.

莉莎实在吓坏了，不敢弄出一点声音来。

I got scared and I ran and left her all alone.

我一害怕就跑了，把她一个人扔下了。

I have never been so scared in all my life.

我一生中从来没有这么害怕过。

Mollie told me what she’d done and I was really scared on her account.

莫莉告诉我她的所作所为，我真是替她感到后怕。

I bowed my head timidly and dared not look at my father’s cloudy face.

我胆怯地低着头，不敢看爸爸那张阴云密布的脸。

My brain is blank. I just want to leave this horrible place.

我大脑一片空白，只想离开这个恐怖的地方。

满意

The result is satisfactory.

结果令人满意。

It is difficult to please everybody.

众口难调。

There is always a smile of contentment on her face.

她脸上总是挂着心满意足的微笑。

Seeing their task finished gives them a sense of satisfaction.

看到任务完成了，他们感到很满意。

She seemed pleased at the suggestion.

她好像对这个建议很满意。

I’m pleased with the way things have been going.

我很满意事情的进展。

He glanced at her with a pleased smile.

他面带满意的笑容瞥了她一眼。

Lucy’s face wore a satisfied expression.

露西一脸的心满意足。

It has been hard to adjust but now I’m getting satisfaction from my work.

适应虽然很难，但是现在我已逐渐从工作中获得了满足。

惊讶

We were all astonished at the unexpected news.

听了这个突如其来的消息，我们都十分惊讶。

The audience was inexpressibly astonished at the brilliant performance.

那出色的表演使观众感到说不出的惊叹。

A matter of repeated occurrence like this will not astonish people.

这样司空见惯的事，不会使人吃惊。

She was surprised that he had no words of blame for her.

使她惊讶的是，他竟然没有对她说任何怪罪的话。

感动

Touched deeply , we…

被深深感动，我们……

With tears streaming down her face, she...

泪水顺着她的脸颊流了下来，她……

All those present to listen to her sad story were moved to tears.

凡在场听到她悲惨经历的人无不感动得流泪。

I was greatly touched by what you told me.

你对我讲的话使我大受感动。

It is very moving to see how much strangers can care for each other.

看到陌生人之间这般彼此关照，实在令人感动。

His speech was inspiring and touched my heart.

他的发言鼓舞人心，让我很受触动。

思考

An idea flashed across his mind.

他脑子里闪过一个念头。

An idea formed in his mind.

他脑中有了一个主意。

An idea occurred to / hit / struck him.

他突然有了一个主意。

He looked out of the window, biting his lips, as if thinking.

他一边看着窗外，一边咬着嘴唇，仿佛在思考。

She was deep in thought and heard little of what was being said around her.

她在沉思，几乎听不见周围的话。

The opportunity had gone and his mind scrabbled for alternatives.

机会已经失去了，他苦苦思索别的方案。