【唐山大地震的英语作文初中】如何使英语作文飞速升级？2016~2018福州高中入学考试英语作文目录！

和理科不同

语文和英语都可以提前积累

还可以试试往年入学考试的题型

先对照题目写一篇，然后

和范文相比，哪里不一样？

最后背了范文

这样会有积累的效果！

2018福建高中入学考试英语写作

a卷写作

书面表达：如果你是李华，你的英国笔友亨利对武术感兴趣。请参考以下信息，用英语给他写一封电子邮件，邀请他暑假参观你学校举办的第一届武术节，感受中华武术文化。字数在80左右。

Time :朱莉7-9 2018

Activities : competitions，shows

history of Wu Shu : thousands of years

Benfits of Wu Shu:

注意事项

提出的信息必须包括在内，可以适当发挥，开头已经给出，字数不包括在内。

意思清楚，表达流畅，文字连贯，写着规范。

不要在文章中使用真实姓名、学校名称和提及信息以外的地名。

参考术语：practice Wu Shu

正式范文

Dear Henry:

I am glad that you are interested in Wushu . here I ' ve got good news for you . the first Wushu festival of our school is going tobe held from juu 2018 . I '

Chinese Wushu has a history of thousands of years . practicing Wushu is a good way to improve our health . besides，It help sus to develop strong wills

Looking forward to seeing you soon。

Yours，

李华

b卷写作

书面表达：如果你是李华，现在在国际学校上学。你在纠正“我和传统文化有约会”的主题活动。请选择你喜欢的传说故事或传统工艺品，用英语写一篇短文，分享中国传统文化。(大卫亚设，Northern Exposure)字数大约有80个。

内容要点

你的选择就是喜欢的原因。

相关传说或历史；

感想或启示。

注意事项

必须包含所有内容点。

意思清楚，表达流畅，文字连贯，写着规范。

请勿在正文中使用真实姓名、学校名称和地名。

正式范文

fancy lantern is my favorite form of Chinese traditional art，for it's colorful and beautiful。

fancy lantern is made of bamboo or metal covered by cloth or paper with pictures of different characters from Chinese fairy tales . at the lantern from vrom

fancy lantern has been around for about 3000 years and it ' s still popular among people，which reminds us that with the development of society cuity

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2017年福建中考英语作文

题目

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官方范文

Hi, John, I'm glad to hear that you're planning to travel around China during the summer vacation. I'd like to invite you to my hometown Fuian for a visit.

Fuian lies in the southeast of China with Fuzhou as its capital city. It has a population of over 38 million.Because of the nice environment,it's known as Refreshing Fuiian, which attracts millions of tourists from homeand abrosd. If you come, you can enjoy fresh air, blue sky as well as beautiful mountains and clear rivers. Many famous places of interest like Mount Wuyi and Gulang Ialand are well worth vi, you can taste various kinds of delicious food.

I'm looking forward to meeting you!

2016年福建中考英语作文

题目

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官方范文

Hello, everyone! It's a great honor to give a speech here. I'd like to tell you something about my friend Li Lei. He likes playing football and he also likes computer games. To get good grades, he often cheats in the exams. As a result, he gradually falls behind other students. What's worse, he isn’t trusted by others.

So I think we should be honest in the exams. And it's important to do homework by ourselves.

We ought to tell the truth and be honest students. If we promise to do something, we'd better try our

best to keep the promise.

Thats all. Thank you for listening!

英语是重视平时积累多于难题攻克的科目

那么除了背诵范文以外

还可以在哪些方面

努力把英语作文的分数提高呢？

参考一下以下的小技巧就可以了！

一、词汇选择——标新立异

在写作中“较高级词汇”的使用主要是指使用《大纲》上没有的词语、使用通过构词法变化来的新词、使用同(近)义词或反义词等来代替常见词语。

　1)这栋房子在芳草街的一栋楼上。

A: The flat is in a building on Fangcao Street.

B: The flat situates in a building on Fangcao Street.

分析: is in是常见词语，而situates in则是《大纲》上没有的，属于高级词汇。

　2)在周末我们做很多作业。

A: At weekends, we have a lot of homework to do.

B: At weekends, we have endless homework to do.

分析：B句在表达时没有使用过于直接的a lot of，而是使用了endless。endless就是由《大纲》词汇end加后缀-less变化来的。

　3)洗澡间和厨房都很好。

A: The bathroom and the kitchen are good.

B. The bathroom and the kitchen are well-furnished.

在表达要点时，B句使用了well furnished,这比good语气强，也显得生动。

　在造句时,“较高级词汇”如能运用贴切自然，哪怕整篇文章只用上一个，也会使你的作文显示出与众不同。

二、结构造句——与众不同

在造句时,既要使句子生动，又要使其简明扼要。

　1、使用与人不同的表达方式，特别是提倡打破汉语句子结构的束缚而重组的句子更受欢迎。

　1)唐山曾在二十世纪八十年代发生过一次大地震。

A: There was a strong earthquake in Tangshan in the 1980s.

B: A terrible earthquake hit/struck Tangshan in the 1980s.

大多数同学使用了there be结构，这是对的，但是B句却摒弃了常见句式。另辟蹊径而使用了“主语+谓语+宾语”结构，且使用了terrible,hit/strike这样的词汇，更是难能可贵的。

　2)你八月十五日的来信我今天早晨收到了。

A:I received your letter which was written on August 15th this morning.(多数人使用的方式)

B: Your letter of August 15th reached/ got to me this morning.(与多数人使用的方式不同,简洁)

2.使用一些强势句式，如强调句、感叹句、倒装句等，增强语句的表现力。如：

3)阿福救了我妹妹。

A: Ah Fu saved my sister.(一般句式)

B: It was Ah Fu that saved my sister.(强调句式)

　4)我们看到庄稼和蔬菜长势喜人很是高兴。

A: We were glad to see crops and vegetables growing well.(一般陈述句)

B: How glad we were to see crops and vegetables growing well.(感叹句)

　3、句式多样,复杂得体。

在写作中应避免使用相同长度的相同句型，而应注意句式的变化，如长短句结合，简单句、并列句与复合句共用，还可使用简化句等；一些较复杂的结构如独立主格，分词结构等也可使用。下面的表达中A句简单句多，而且多处使用there be结构，显得单调、乏味，而B句就有自己的特色(请同学们自己分析)。

　5)这是一套25平方米的住房，住房里面有卧室、有洗澡间、有厨房；卧室里有床、沙发、桌子和椅子等。

A: It's a flat of 25 square metres. There is a bedroom in the flat. There is a bathroom and a kitchen in it, too. In the bedroom, there is a bed; there is a sofa, a desk and a chair as well.

B: It's a flat of 25 square metres, with a bedroom, a bathroom and a kitchen. In the bedroom there is a bed, a sofa, a desk and a chair.

三、布局谋篇——独具匠心

在写作中，我们可按时间、空间或其它逻辑顺序来安排各要点，同时为使主题突出,结构严谨，我们应注意学习和使用交代句以及段落的主题句等。在布局谋篇上，NMET2002范文堪称典范。请看：

Opinions are divided on the question.

60% of the students are against the idea of entrance fees. They believe a public park should be free of charge. People need a place where they can rest and enjoy themselves. Charging entrance fees will no doubt keep some people away. What is more, it will become necessary to build gates and walls, which will do harm to the appearance of a city.

On the other hand, 40% think that fees should be charged because you need money to pay gardens and other workers, and to buy plants and young trees. They suggested, however, fees should be charged low.

1)该文使用Opinions are divided...作交代句，开门见山，随后两个段落均使用了主题句(见黑体字部分)，使全文结构紧凑，表达严谨。

2)在表述要点时范文还对要点出场顺序作了调整，如“40%的同学认为应收门票，但不宜过高。”前部分作为主题句放在句首，而后部分另起一句放在句末：They suggested, however, fees should be charged low.这样就分清了轻重缓急，主题突出，条理清楚。

3)范文使用了and, what is more, however等连词，在段落之间使用了on the other hand(说明前后两个观点是相悖的)，这些连接手段的运用加强了句子之间、段落之间的联系，使文章表达连贯，浑然一体。

4)范文在第二段为说明不收门票的“原因”时增加了Charging entrance fees will no doubt keep some people away.等细节，这也是解决句与句之间缺少连贯性的常见方法。

【来源：中考英语】