【英语作文小学和初中对比】雅思写作高分攻略|今诗比较类指导小作文，掐

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雅思托福10年以上一线教育

汉语说得还不错，杜尚是他家的猫

在这里分享他的原创雅思作文干货。

每个版本都有配音，在同名公众号“英语考试猫”上

你好，我是来自加拿大的IELTS外教Mac。今天，我分享今天的比较类雅思地图小作文。旧规则，以下是正文目录。

1、标题。

2、高分板文。

3、范文宣读

4、范文正统词汇汉英对照，包括：

地图类雅思小作文高分吐字区显示“一致性和连接性”的词汇型1个图片区分3个方位介词。

问：

the maps below show changes in the city of Nelson in recent times。

summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features，and make comparisons where relevant .

-模特安东尼勒高分板文朗读-

雅思作文高分攻略|今诗比较类指导小作文，掐

用范文音频戳这里是

the maps compare the city of Nelson in the year 2000 and now after undergoing several changes .

Overall，the town has witnessed changes to its transportation system and has also seen the addition of new amenities such as a shopping center and

Lying south of the city center，the port-side road that ran parallel to the shore，has been converted into pedestrian use only，Allowing

Further more，in the north，east of the university，the new shopping center has been developed in lieu of the forested area that previouse

Finally，the train station has been relocated from the west side to the middle of the town，just north of the city center that now has a bicycle re

-Essay Analysis范式分析-

标准任务1 Phrases地图类雅思短文高分句型：

The maps公司地图比较了in the year 2000Overall changes的一些变化。总的来说，has witnessed是has also seen the addition of lying south of the……。的南端ran parallel to和……。添加S also been added，connecting连接constructed in the north北east of，目睹并行has been converted into转换为have been dever……。东部has been developed开发in lieu of替代；代替Previously existed之前存在的situated to the south……。南东方省……。东部has been erected创建了taking place of，而不是on the west side of……。西部has now

addition of addition of addition converted into transformation；developed developed development to added constructed development erected Transformed into to Transformed to relocated relocated Words showing Cohesion(CC)，显示了“一致性和连接性”的单词和短语

After overall、andalsosuch aslayingthat、allowingthisover the last twenty years、connectingitselffurthermore和meanwhite

[图片区分三个位置介词]

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