【小学生英文作文修改】英语写作技巧：修改字符串句

英语写作成绩：常见句子错误串

字符串句是指在没有连接词或标点符号的情况下错误地连接两个单独的子句。最常见的问题是用逗号“，”直接连接两个有意义的句子。如果在完整的独立语句之间使用逗号，则会生成字符串句子。是：

Mike decided to stop smoking，he didn't want to die of lung cancer。

如何修改这个句子，这里提出五种修改方法。

1.Mike decided to stop smoking，for he didn ' t want to die of lung cancer。

2.Mike decided to stop smoking because he didn ' t want to die of lung cancer。

3.Mike decided to stop smoking，not wanting to die of lung cancer。

4.Mike decided to stop smokingHe didn't want to die of lung cancer。

5.Mike decided to stop smoking . he didn ' t want to die of lung cancer。

请做以下练习。

Exercises: revise the run-ons

1.I wanted badly to cry，however I remained cold and silent。更改为：

I wanted badly to cryHowever，I remained cold and silent .

I wanted badly to cry.however，I remained cold and silent

2.a lot of men today get their hair styled，they use perfume and other cosmetics as well。更改为：

a lot of men today get their hair styled，and they use perfume and other cosmetics as well。

3.in order to become a nurse，I studied hard for my state boards passing them was not easy。更改为：

In order to become a nurse，I studied hard for my state boards，for passing them was not easy .

In order to become a nurse，I studied hard for my state boards because passing them was not easy .

In order to become a nurse，I studied hard for my state boards . passing them was not easy .

4.the Christmas party was dull，Jane and I left at 9:30。更改为：

The Christmas party was dull，so Jane and I left at 9:30。

5.people are worried about the future，they are especially concerned about the economy。更改为：

People are worried about the future，and they are especially concerned about the economy。

6.I got up at 7 a.m .then I went to school。更改为：

I got up at 7a.m .and then I went to school。

7.the projector broke for a second time，some people in the audience hissed，others shouted for a refund.

when the projector broke for a second time，some people in the audience hissed，and others shouted for a refund .

8.Cindy found the movie disappointing lee thought it was wonderful。更改为：

while Cindy found the movie disappointing，lee thought it was wonderful .

Cindy found the movie disappointing while lee thought it was wonderful .

注：我们经常把副词、词组、词组误认为连词，用于连接两个完整的意思。这些单词包括then、hence、therefore、however、as a result、consequently、what's more等，这些单词前面都有“；”有，或者"有。"或者添加连词，例如“and”。