【小学做了什么有意义的事英语作文】第四阶段概述写作：My Ideal Job

我的ideal job

Directions: For this part，You are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic : my ideal job . You should write no less than 120 whan

1.人们对职业各有不同的理想。

我理想的工作是什么？

3.我打算怎么准备我理想的工作？

remember to write your composition neatly。

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我的idel工作

when we are asked about what we want to be in the future、we have different answers . we may want to be a doctor、a lawyer、a politician、

我的ideal job is to be an excellent teacher . this idea came into beingwhen I was very young . no one is born with knowledge . if I am a teacher。I will be able to turn an ignorant man into a learnedperson . I will teach what I know to my students . some times，I will be able to learn something fromso life will be interesting and meaningful.

bu I know it isn ' t easy for me to be a good teacher . being a teacher needs knowledge，patience ，skills，etc.first，I must study very

So，you see，Different jobs require Different talents . I will study hard now at college and get my self well prepared for my future teaching jojo

[注释]

ideal:理想

come into being:生成

learned:学过的

创意：创造性

梅宁福：有意义

帕蒂安斯：耐心

鲁德：无礼

live up to:不要失败。体面地满足要求.

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这篇文章是根据汉语大纲展开的议论文。这种题型作文在最近几年的大学英语四级考试中经常出现。

文章第一段泛提人对职业有着不同的理想。第二段详细讲述作者本人的理想以及实现这一理想的意义。第三段实现这个理想不容易，需要付出很多努力。作者用列举的方法陈述这些努力。这些枚举术语被恰当地使用，如First、second和Third。最后一段总结了上述内容。

整个句子结构严格，转换自然，词汇恰当，阅读非常流畅。

参考文献：英语作文高分必须背丛书：《大学英语四级作文/梨花传》主编，武汉大学出版社，2005年。