【自主创新英语作文初中】流着今天的汗水，为英语思维逻辑作文铸造明天辉煌创新的英语优秀作文。

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高考英语作文已经悄悄地向很多考生频繁招手，本文作者为考生提供了创新的英语作文，满足了考生“家有粮，心不慌”的要求。

往根部倒水，有助于“使用”。用英语思维逻辑写英语的阳光照亮了优秀英语作文的高分之路。以《冬奥会》为剧本创作，充分展示中国人积极参与全球活动的示范作用。关于优秀英语作文的背景提示如下：(威廉莎士比亚、冬奥会、冬奥会、冬奥会、冬奥会、冬奥会、冬奥会)

李进同学的海外交换生Jessica在看北京第24届世界冬奥会电视直播时，看到李进是冬奥会志愿者，发了一封祝贺李进完美志愿的电子邮件，表示以后想成为奥运会志愿者。为此，请以李进的名义用英语给杰西卡写回信邮件。冬奥会志愿者的心情和对中外宾客服务的自豪感和自豪感得到的感觉或收获。

Dear Jessica，

I thank you so much for your e-mail asking me to tell you about the information on voluntary-service work，Which is centrally concerned with bith

This helps me to be pleased at BOWG，Sharing a joy at happiness with which I was filled in offering voluntary service to word-wide guests success fuse

enabled to learn how to build up a harmonious and friendly relationship between people from countries、I become more respectfully和morally

the voluntary service makes me see a sense In my dream to come true，remaining full of spirit with people held In great affection，In mutual assess

these well-doing ideas are to put into practice by means of doing the voluntary-service work excellently，Which brings enjoyment to me in

One，whose Olympic-game spirit together with its mission is set in mind，Remains true with the original aspiration . that inspires me to

they let those in need feel it convenient，Comfortable and warm to them to live in the Olympic village by working hard at offering them service patition

or talents, together with strong physics. These, as one of volunteers I am all really excellently proud of doing in the host country, China, where to tell viewers something about the true-glory greatness of its ancient history and of contemporary- and modern-culture civilization as human created genuinely.

The civilization is set in great hope and dream, I feel, which turns the host country favourable for becoming strongly intellectual and keeping highly intelligent to Beijing 2022’s Olympic Winter Game at present.

The above serves as a useful or helpful point of reference in bringing you to be one of volunteers hopefully in the coming Olympic game.

Yours Truly,

Lijin, one of your classmates

上述英语作文可以看出：

当志愿者可以学到如何建立友好关系，增强沟通能力，友爱互助履行责任的能力；志愿者在相互学习与合作时体会个人和社会价值中，个人智力和精神得到成长，向需要帮助的中外宾客尽最大努力以耐心、细心和善心提供服务，以让其便利、舒适和温暖地生活在奥运村。

感想是当志愿者很自豪并告诉观众主办国历史和文化的文明。此文明是希望也是梦想，有利于主办国智慧强盛办奥运……充分展示中国人参与全球活动积极的所言所行的示范作用。

上述内容希望对你参加下届奥运会的志愿者有帮助性的参考。

上述英语作文让读者认识到：思维与英语语言交际能力有意识地结合，达到中外文化交际之需要。通过实例英语写作，理解所写文章特定观点、扩大思考的幅度、扩展文本的语境，使英语写作联系和运用让学生把理解、扩展的思想用于写作实践，让学生对语言形式、观点和内容，“三位一体”，使得思考和逻辑及语法具体化了。这样提高学生的思辨能力，带动学生英语写作技能提升。

这篇英语作文由于观点新、思想新所以创造了写作者自己独特的模板，也就是说，没有采用网上铺天盖地所谓“模板套路”（如：on the one hand …; on the other hand…as far as I am concerned,…what is more, moreover, furthermore,firstly,secondly, thirdly…假如有了这些“模板套路”绝不意味着能写好的与众不同的英语作文。）

由此看出，当前的大考英语作文中普遍存在一些问题。如有学者评价大考英语写作的弊端：“现在大考英语写作考的是语言知识及语言形式的识别，没有考多少语言的运用和产出能力。”考试内容与实际语言能力的脱节，导致“大考学生考试后照样写不出几句好英文，或说不出几句正确的英语。”

总结

唯有重视英语语言的运用和产出的实际操作训练，考试内容才能与实际语言能力不脱节，如此来说：没有独立于思想之外的模板套路存在，因为思想决定模板，模板不能决定思想，再加上每一个考生思想都是各不相同。如以上述英语思维写作实例为例，重视英语思维写作的学生便写作出优秀英语作文。这是源于：挥洒今日汗水浇灌英语思维逻辑写作 铸就明日辉煌创新优秀英语写作，所以大考考生学生们自然得高分！甚至还要得满分！！英语实际应用能力当然提升[赞]