「CET-6段首句作文」Hobbies

[CET-6段第一句作文] Hobbies

directions : for this part，You are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic given below . You are given the Fe

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1.a hobby is an interesting pursuit，not a main occupation。

2.different people have different hobbies。

3.there are many advantages of having a hobby。

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A hobby is an interesting pursuit 1，not a main occupation . we take up a hobby merely as a pastime at our leisure。it serves as a relaxation

different people have different hobbies . somelike collecting stamps . it is an interesting and instructive hobby，For many stamps provide us with。

there are many advantages of having a hobby . hobbies add pleasure to life . they fill our vacant hourswith interest，So we are not likely to fall intowe need an occupation of some kind to keep us busy at our old age，After we have earned our retirement . without any hobby，we would feel bored.the

[注释]

追求pursuit:

at our leisure:空闲的时候

strenuous:辛苦

pertaining to:是

energetic:充满活力

vacant hours:空闲时间

idleness:空闲

[简评]

这是根据段落第一句展开的说明文。

全文每段都围绕主题句加以阐述，有繁有简，详略得当。首段交待hobby是一种有趣的消遣方式。它能使我们的大脑在紧张的劳动之后得到放松。接下来，作者用举例法说明不同的人有着不同的爱好。有的人喜爱集邮，从邮票中获得多种知识；有的人喜欢体育运动，通过运动强身健体。最后一段介绍了业余爱好带给人们的好处：它为我们的生活增添欢乐和情趣，使我们的生活不再空虚。

这篇文章共分三段，各有侧重，紧扣hobby这一主题，形成一个有机的整体。生动具体的例子使文章读来令人兴致盎然。

资料来源：新大学英语四、六级考点透视丛书：六级写作/李华田主编，武汉大学出版社，2006