四六级作文权威性手记教你如何使用说白了的天龙八部干货知识

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用独家代理的四六级作文权威性手记

教你如何使用说白了的天龙八部

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提议大伙儿备好笔纸，边看世起

关键提醒：

问：教师，听说如今考試展现一种反模版的发展趋势？

答：没有错！优秀作文的架构如同一个人的骨架，优秀作文的素材图片如同一个人的肉体，光看铁架子自然十分类似，可是架构里添充进来的內容可能变成评分的重要。可是最先，你需要有一个框。添充进来的素材图片请见：天龙八部（已发）。

一定要相互配合声频看

控制模块篇

总体目标：运用约1小时，提前准备相匹配五个控制模块就可以。

控制模块1：描图（开始經典1）

①The picture displays a very special scene: ______. ②Simple as it is, what the picture conveys to us is thought-provoking: _______.

第①句能够换成：

1. As is humorously/vividly/clearly/subtly depicted/described/portrayed/illustrated in the picture/drawing/cartoon, ______________. (语句)

2. From the picture, a seemingly superficial phenomenon is presented:____________. (语句)

3. This picture captures a critical moment that ___________. (语句).

4. The drawing presents us with a thought-provoking scene: ____________. (语句)

5. In the picture we could see clearly that ______________________. (语句)

6. As we can see from the picture, ________. (语句)

7. As the picture given depicts, ________. (语句)

注：表明照片的叫法可爱卡通cartoon; 素描画sketch; 相片photo; 照片picture; 手绘画drawing。

第②句能够换成：

1. What the picture is trying to present is that _____(句).

2. The picture intends to inform us that ______(句).

3. What does the cartoonist want to tell us? Actually, this drawing shows us a social phenomenon that______________(语句).

4. The artist of the cartoon apparently intends to draw our attention to ________(主题风格英语单词).

5. In effect, this cartoon is a miniature of a prevalent phenomenon. _____(句).

6. Conspicuously, this cartoon symbolically characterizes a status quo. _____(句).

7. Simple as it is, what the picture conveys to us is thought-provoking. _____(句).

举例说明：

Ironically, the cartoon displays a very special scene: a young student is asking for a book named “How to Do Well in School Without Studying”, and the lady at the front desk advises him to find it in the fiction section. Simple as it is, what the picture conveys to us is thought-provoking: there is no shortcut to learning.

★学神版（给大伙儿看一下模版的随机应变）

College education has recently arisen as one of the essential issues, as is vividly described in the cartoon. A young student is asking for a book named “How to Do Well in School Without Studying”, and the lady at the front desk advises him to find it in the fiction section. Obviously, the artist of the cartoon intends to draw our attention to a simple truth that there is no shortcut to learning.

控制模块2：前言（开始經典2）

①It is often said that: _________(至理名言重述). ②Simple as the remark may sound, it intends to tell us that ________.

第①句“重述前言”能够换成：

(1) Just as the saying goes, ______.

(2) It is often said that _______.

(3) An ancient philosopher once stated that _____.

第②句“表述含意”能够换成：

(1) The saying tells us ________.

(2) The saying indicates that _______.

(3) The saying obviously emphasizes /highlights _____.

举例说明：（大伙儿留意事例的转变）：

The famous scientist Albert Einstein once stated that “I have no special talents. I am only passionately curious.” Simple as the remark may sound, it intends to tell us the importance of being curious. Being curious contributes greatly to our growth and eventually leads to our success.

控制模块3：状况表述（进行經典1）

③Remarkably, this sort of phenomenon becomes the norm in our society, which can be seen almost everywhere. ④There are mainly two factors contributing to this social phenomenon. ⑤To begin with, _______ might be responsible for this social phenomenon. ________ (实际阐述) ⑥Moreover, this phenomenon could be attributed to ________. _______ (实际阐述)

第③句能够换成（看详细情况套入，不适合立即删除）：

1. Remarkably, this sort of phenomenon becomes the norm in our society, which can be seen almost everywhere.

2. Nobody fails to notice this fac t, as it is now quite prevailing in contemporary society.

3. Strikingly, in contemporary society, this sort of phenomenon is becoming increasingly common and eye-catching.

第④句能够换成：

1. There are mainly two factors contributing to this social phenomenon.

2. Why, you may wonder, does this phenomenon arise?

3. The reasons for this social phenomenon are as follows.

4. Two fundamental factors/reasons could account for this social phenomenon.

5. Personally, among all the factors that account for this trend, the following are worth mentioning.

第⑤⑥句能够换成（除开更换句5，请保存表明第一（to begin with），第二（moreover）的叫法）：

1. ________ might be responsible for this social phenomenon.

2. this problem stems from ________.

3. this phenomenon could be attributed to ________.

4. this situation could be seen as a consequence of ________.

5. Perhaps, this primary reason is that ____________.

那麼是什么原因很有可能导致状况呢？缘故候选：

经济发展：economic growth; 人口数量澎涨：population expansion; 教育制度：education system; 亲子教育：family education; 社会影响：social influence; 环境要素：environmental impact;技术创新：technological innovation.

那麼怎样实际阐述呢，能够套入天龙八部或全能句。

如果是前言类，那麼模版能够简单化下，大概的构思便是有两个原因能够表述这句话的准确性，原因1，原因2。

④There are mainly two factors contributing to the correctness of this principle. ⑤To begin with, ________ (实际阐述) ⑥Moreover, _______ (实际阐述).

举例说明1（描图）：

Nevertheless, nowadays people tend to believe there is such a thing as a shortcut to learning. Remarkably, this sort of phenomenon becomes the norm in our society. There are mainly two factors contributing to this social phenomenon. To begin with, it stems from the education system. Schools tend to attach less importance to the basic knowledge, but more to the academic scores. Furthermore, this situation could be seen as a result of the social influence. Young people are under considerable pressure for a living because the competition is increasingly fierce. Consequently, majority of the students are always dreaming for a short path.

举例说明2 （前言） ：

There are mainly two factors contributing to the correctness of this principle. To begin with, curiosity can be seen as the key to success. Only when one is curious about something will he dedicate himself to it. Take Thomas Edison for example, it was his curiosity that made him invent so many things for the future generations. Furthermore, curiosity provides us with the motivation to go forward and inspires us to learn new knowledge. As Apple Company founder Steve Jobs once said, “stay hungry, stay foolish.”

控制模块4：解决问题（进行經典2）

⑧To ______, in my mind, it calls for the efforts from all sides. ⑨From my perspective, it is particularly important that we should take actions. _____(进行论述). ⑩In the meantime, I personally believe that the authority and mass media need to assume this responsibility. _____(进行论述).

第⑧句能够换成：

1. To ______, in my mind, there are at least two approaches.

2. Urgent measures are needed to ________.

3. The following ways can be adopted to ________.

To后边填入形容词 专有名词组成

例如：弘扬/抑止这类社会问题

弘扬：advocate, enhance, strengthen, reinforce, further, advance

抑止：curb, cease, impede, prevent, put an end to, eliminate, rectify

状况：social phenomenon, situation, condition

好（状况）：positive, favorable, desirable

坏（状况）：negative, unfavorable, undesirable, adverse

例：为了更好地处理这一状况，大家必须多方勤奋。

To put an end to this unfavorable phenomenon, in my mind, it calls for the efforts from all sides.

例：为了更好地促进这一状况，大家有下列好多个方式。

The following ways can be adopted to advocate this social phenomenon.

注：这句话较为招数，大伙儿还可以改为汇总式：

4. Given the factors I have just outlined, it can be concluded that_______.

5. All in all, we can safely draw the conclusion that _______.

第⑨句能够换成(本人处理)：

1. From my perspective, only when all of us join in the efforts at all levels can we expect to ______ properly.

2. It seems to me that it is high time that we should take concerted steps.

3. On the micro level, I believe it is every individual’s duty to take actions.

4. From where I stand, every one of us might as well join in the efforts.

5. Accordingly, it is imperative for us to take some measures.

第⑩句能够换成(政府部门处理)：

1. Similarly, I gradually realize that the authority and mass media need to shoulder this responsibility.

2. Since my own voice is too weak to be heard, I hope we can call on the public to take this responsibility.

3. Some relevant laws and regulations should be enacted and enforced.

4. On the macro level, the government and mass media should be held accountable.

5. It is urgent and imperative for the mass media to take some measures.

最先学习培训三种經典句式：

1. 倒装句：Only in this way can we _______________.

2. 强调句：Obviously, it is __________ that _________.

3. 虚拟语气：It is high time that we should take concerted steps to _______________.

举例说明：

The following ways, from my perspective, can be adopted to address the problem. On the macro level, if the department of education can shoulder the responsibility and make relevant measures, the schools will pay more attention to teaching basic knowledge in the future. On the micro level, only by hard work can we form the bedrock of good performance in school.

注：写物品還是要有和题型关系的实际性內容，纯碎用模版看起来一些裂缝，用心科学研究事例，谨记！

控制模块5：正反面见解（进行經典3）

④There is much controversy over _______(议案). ⑤Some people argue that _____(方形见解)._______(进行论述) ⑥Nevertheless, other people adopt a completely different view. They believe that ______(反方论述). _____(进行论述).

⑦Given the factors I have just outlined, it can be concluded that the question quite depends on personal choice. ______(个人见解).

第④句能够换成：

1. ________ has given rise to a heated discussion.

2. _______has caused quite a stir among the general public.

3. As regards ______, there has been a heated discussion among the general public in our society.

4. Opinions vary when it comes to _________.

比如：There is much controversy over whether one should expect a reward after doing a good deed.

第⑤句更换：

argue能够换为maintain/hold/believe/suggest

第⑥句能够换成：

However, those who strongly oppose are not among the minority. They hold that _____.

第⑦句能够换成：

1. When considering opinions of both sides, I am inclined to be in favor of the former/latter one. (出众见解)

2. When considering opinions of both sides, I find they are of the equal weight. (中等见解)

3. ______ is just like a double-edged sword. We might as well avoid those undesirable effects, when making full use of it. (双刃刀)

或是立即写上自身的见解，用六脉神剑“独”这步。

事例：

There is much controversy over whether technology plays an indispensable role in school. Some argue that advanced technology has brought much convenience to students, while enriching the teaching methods in class. However, others adopt a completely different view. They believe technology can be used as an auxiliary tool for interactive teaching and learning, but one can never rely too much on it.

Given the factors I have just outlined, it can be concluded that the question quite depends on personal choice. However, to my knowledge, technology is something, but not everything. One should be very prudent in fully depending on technology.

附则：接下去大家而言说举例说明这回事儿。上年的六级考试谈“自主创新”，假如能提前准备一些事例，是十分有感染力的。可是四级“大学毕业学生就业读研究生”类就看起来实际意义并不大，举例说明是一种非常好的方法促使文章内容有感染力（顺带cou zi）。

下列大家得出一些句式，大伙儿能够熟练掌握。

举例说明开始句：

(1) I can think of no better illustration of this idea than the following one.

(2) A case in point is that _____________________（语句）.

(3) Numerous illustrations can be given, but this will suffice.

(4) For instance, __________________________.

(5) There are inspiring (好状况)/upsetting(坏状况) parallels today. _________（学神版）.

写具体例证：

自身提前准备一些全能的事例，假如写人们的精神实质，下列这一事例一般可用。

Take Steve Jobs, the Apple company founder, a great innovator, who strikes to the belief for his life time that __________comes before victory, for instance. Without it, he couldn’t have built Apple into an incredibly successful company with a string of successes no one else can rival. (括弧里填入creativity，就变成另一个事例)

举例说明：

There is much controversy over the issue of whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. To my knowledge, online communication can replace the traditional way. Last year, I went to the US as an exchange student. I talked with my parents through skype and it was really convenient. We shared all the happiness and sadness on the internet and I could never forget that experience.

运用篇

提醒：写一篇作文如同建房子，你现阶段早已拥有“控制模块”，你需要做的便是把这种“砖头”组成起來，一些砖头不搭配，你要必须略微修改一下。依据题型，灵活应变就可以。

一般来说，有下列几类组成。

控制模块1 控制模块3 控制模块4（描图式）

控制模块1 控制模块5（描图式）

控制模块2 控制模块3 控制模块4（前言式）

开始 控制模块3 控制模块4（敞开式）

看下列一些事例，我们一起来试一下。

例文1：

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should focus on the impact of social networking websites on reading. You are required to write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.

“I love reading. I read about 3 hours a day.

My favorite book is Facebook*.”

*Facebook is the name of a social networking website.

剖析（关键！）：它是一篇描图类，题目规定大家写“社交媒体针对阅读文章的危害”。

选用“控制模块1 控制模块5”的方式。

As we can see from the picture, two persons are discussing about reading. While to our amusement, the boy says his favorite book is Facebook. The picture seems to be humorous and ridiculous but thought-provoking on second thoughts, which intends to inform us that the social network has exerted an important impact on our daily reading.

Opinions vary when it comes to the impact of social networking websites on reading. Some people insist that social network provides them with large collections of information at a tremendous speed and stimulates their reading interest. On the contrary, other people claim that nowadays a host of youngsters pay so much attention to reading on social networks that they don’t have adequate opportunities or time to read traditional books.

There is no surprise that there are different opinions about the impact of social networking websites on reading. However, as a college student, I am convinced that it is necessary for us to read on social networking websites, but it is of greater necessity for us to read traditional books. We can never overly depend on social network. Only in this way can we become more educated and have a more bright future.

例文2：

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay explaining why it is unwise to put all eggs in one basket. You can give explain to illustrate your point. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.

剖析（关键！）：它是一篇前言类，题目规定大家写“社交媒体针对阅读文章的危害”。

选用“控制模块2 控制模块4 汇总”的方式。

Choosing a right strategy can exert a huge impact on our success. An English saying goes like this: Don’t put all your eggs in one basket. What it wants to reveal is that it is unwise to be totally dependent on one resource.

There are several reasons contributing to the correctness of this principle. To begin with, it is rather risky to put all the hope in one place. If one can have a contingency plan, it can deal with the unexpected when it comes to important event. What’s more, focusing on all the aspects at the same time contributes to a more balanced life. Suppose one would like to be admitted into a college. It is of vital importance for him to apply for several colleges. In this way, there is a better chance for him to be admitted.

Therefore, it is unadvisable to put everything on a single venture. Having a backup plan could help one lead a better life.

例文3：

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the use of robots. Try to imagine what will happen when more and more robots take the place of human beings in industry as well as people‘s daily lives.

剖析（关键！）：它是一篇对外开放类，题目规定大家写“憧憬未来”。

选用“开始 控制模块3 控制模块4”的方式。

开始段能够试着应用天龙八部，控制模块3略微修改下，控制模块4修改防止太模版化。

The development of technology has brought us unprecedented transformation, which is inevitable and undeniable. Robots, which are capable of exhibiting artificial intelligence, have emerged into our vision, and tend to play an increasingly important role in our life. For example, this year, Google’s Alphago beats Ke Jie, a master Go player, which causes quite a stir in the society. Consequently, there is much controversy over what will happen if robots replace human beings in the future.

When it comes to the influence of robots on human beings, there are a number of consequences. To begin with, we all come to a realization that one should be well equipped with advanced skills, such as art design or computer programming; otherwise they will become jobless, because robots will be more likely to take their roles. Furthermore, robots can assist human in a variety of ways. They can bring us much convenience and help to do dangerous work, such as coal mining. Also, robots, with their enormous computing ability, can provide accurate information for us, such as medical treatment.

Based on my personal experience, I can safely draw a conclusion that the robot is a double-edged sword. Whether it is a boon or a bane will be discussed for a number of years to come. However, one should make sensible use of technology, being a master rather than a slave of it.

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