陪你冲刺四六级 倒计时第3天⏰
今天陈曲老师来教大家一个绝招
用独家的四六级作文权威笔记
教你怎么用所谓的天龙八部
干货很长很走心,配合音频看文章
建议大家备好纸笔,边看边记
重点提示:
问:老师,据说现在考试呈现一种反模板的趋势?
答:没错!作文的框架就像一个人的骨架,作文的素材就像一个人的血肉,光看架子当然非常相似,但是框架里填充进去的内容将会成为得分的关键。但是首先,你需要有一个框。填充进去的素材请见:天龙八部(已发)。
一定要配合音频看
模块篇
目标:利用约1小时,准备对应5个模块即可。
模块1:描图(开头经典1)
①The picture displays a very special scene: ______. ②Simple as it is, what the picture conveys to us is thought-provoking: _______.
第①句可以替换成:
1. As is humorously/vividly/clearly/subtly depicted/described/portrayed/illustrated in the picture/drawing/cartoon, ______________. (句子)
2. From the picture, a seemingly superficial phenomenon is presented:____________. (句子)
3. This picture captures a critical moment that ___________. (句子).
4. The drawing presents us with a thought-provoking scene: ____________. (句子)
5. In the picture we could see clearly that ______________________. (句子)
6. As we can see from the picture, ________. (句子)
7. As the picture given depicts, ________. (句子)
注:表示图片的说法卡通cartoon; 素描sketch; 照片photo; 图片picture; 手绘drawing。
第②句可以替换成:
1. What the picture is trying to present is that _____(句).
2. The picture intends to inform us that ______(句).
3. What does the cartoonist want to tell us? Actually, this drawing shows us a social phenomenon that______________(句子).
4. The artist of the cartoon apparently intends to draw our attention to ________(主题单词).
5. In effect, this cartoon is a miniature of a prevalent phenomenon. _____(句).
6. Conspicuously, this cartoon symbolically characterizes a status quo. _____(句).
7. Simple as it is, what the picture conveys to us is thought-provoking. _____(句).
举例:
Ironically, the cartoon displays a very special scene: a young student is asking for a book named “How to Do Well in School Without Studying”, and the lady at the front desk advises him to find it in the fiction section. Simple as it is, what the picture conveys to us is thought-provoking: there is no shortcut to learning.
★学霸版(给大家看看模板的变通)
College education has recently arisen as one of the essential issues, as is vividly described in the cartoon. A young student is asking for a book named “How to Do Well in School Without Studying”, and the lady at the front desk advises him to find it in the fiction section. Obviously, the artist of the cartoon intends to draw our attention to a simple truth that there is no shortcut to learning.
模块2:引言(开头经典2)
①It is often said that: _________(名言重述). ②Simple as the remark may sound, it intends to tell us that ________.
第①句“重述引言”可以替换成:
(1) Just as the saying goes, ______.
(2) It is often said that _______.
(3) An ancient philosopher once stated that _____.
第②句“解释含义”可以替换成:
(1) The saying tells us ________.
(2) The saying indicates that _______.
(3) The saying obviously emphasizes /highlights _____.
举例:(大家注意例子的变化):
The famous scientist Albert Einstein once stated that “I have no special talents. I am only passionately curious.” Simple as the remark may sound, it intends to tell us the importance of being curious. Being curious contributes greatly to our growth and eventually leads to our success.
模块3:现象解释(展开经典1)
③Remarkably, this sort of phenomenon becomes the norm in our society, which can be seen almost everywhere. ④There are mainly two factors contributing to this social phenomenon. ⑤To begin with, _______ might be responsible for this social phenomenon. ________ (具体论述) ⑥Moreover, this phenomenon could be attributed to ________. _______ (具体论述)
第③句可以替换成(看具体情况套用,不合适直接删掉):
1. Remarkably, this sort of phenomenon becomes the norm in our society, which can be seen almost everywhere.
2. Nobody fails to notice this fact, as it is now quite prevailing in contemporary society.
3. Strikingly, in contemporary society, this sort of phenomenon is becoming increasingly common and eye-catching.
第④句可以替换成:
1. There are mainly two factors contributing to this social phenomenon.
2. Why, you may wonder, does this phenomenon arise?
3. The reasons for this social phenomenon are as follows.
4. Two fundamental factors/reasons could account for this social phenomenon.
5. Personally, among all the factors that account for this trend, the following are worth mentioning.
第⑤⑥句可以替换成(除了替换句5,请保留表示第一(to begin with),第二(moreover)的说法):
1. ________ might be responsible for this social phenomenon.
2. this problem stems from ________.
3. this phenomenon could be attributed to ________.
4. this situation could be seen as a consequence of ________.
5. Perhaps, this primary reason is that ____________.
那么什么原因可能造成现象呢?原因备选:
经济增长:economic growth; 人口膨胀:population expansion; 教育体制:education system; 家庭教育:family education; 社会影响:social influence; 环境因素:environmental impact;技术革新:technological innovation.
那么如何具体论述呢,可以套用天龙八部或万能句。
如果是引言类,那么模板可以简化下,大致的思路就是有两个理由可以解释这句话的正确性,理由1,理由2。
④There are mainly two factors contributing to the correctness of this principle. ⑤To begin with, ________ (具体论述) ⑥Moreover, _______ (具体论述).
举例1(描图):
Nevertheless, nowadays people tend to believe there is such a thing as a shortcut to learning. Remarkably, this sort of phenomenon becomes the norm in our society. There are mainly two factors contributing to this social phenomenon. To begin with, it stems from the education system. Schools tend to attach less importance to the basic knowledge, but more to the academic scores. Furthermore, this situation could be seen as a result of the social influence. Young people are under considerable pressure for a living because the competition is increasingly fierce. Consequently, majority of the students are always dreaming for a short path.
举例2 (引言) :
There are mainly two factors contributing to the correctness of this principle. To begin with, curiosity can be seen as the key to success. Only when one is curious about something will he dedicate himself to it. Take Thomas Edison for example, it was his curiosity that made him invent so many things for the future generations. Furthermore, curiosity provides us with the motivation to go forward and inspires us to learn new knowledge. As Apple Company founder Steve Jobs once said, “stay hungry, stay foolish.”
模块4:问题解决(展开经典2)
⑧To ______, in my mind, it calls for the efforts from all sides. ⑨From my perspective, it is particularly important that we should take actions. _____(展开阐述). ⑩In the meantime, I personally believe that the authority and mass media need to assume this responsibility. _____(展开阐述).
第⑧句可以替换成:
1. To ______, in my mind, there are at least two approaches.
2. Urgent measures are needed to ________.
3. The following ways can be adopted to ________.
To后面填上动词+名词组合
比如:发扬/抑制这种社会现象
发扬:advocate, enhance, strengthen, reinforce, further, advance
抑制:curb, cease, impede, prevent, put an end to, eliminate, rectify
现象:social phenomenon, situation, condition
好(现象):positive, favorable, desirable
坏(现象):negative, unfavorable, undesirable, adverse
例:为了解决这个现象,我们需要各方努力。
To put an end to this unfavorable phenomenon, in my mind, it calls for the efforts from all sides.
例:为了推动这个现象,我们有以下几个方法。
The following ways can be adopted to advocate this social phenomenon.
注:这句话比较套路,大家也可以改成总结式:
4. Given the factors I have just outlined, it can be concluded that_______.
5. All in all, we can safely draw the conclusion that _______.
第⑨句可以替换成(个人解决):
1. From my perspective, only when all of us join in the efforts at all levels can we expect to ______ properly.
2. It seems to me that it is high time that we should take concerted steps.
3. On the micro level, I believe it is every individual’s duty to take actions.
4. From where I stand, every one of us might as well join in the efforts.
5. Accordingly, it is imperative for us to take some measures.
第⑩句可以替换成(政府解决):
1. Similarly, I gradually realize that the authority and mass media need to shoulder this responsibility.
2. Since my own voice is too weak to be heard, I hope we can call on the public to take this responsibility.
3. Some relevant laws and regulations should be enacted and enforced.
4. On the macro level, the government and mass media should be held accountable.
5. It is urgent and imperative for the mass media to take some measures.
首先学习三种经典句型:
1. 倒装句:Only in this way can we _______________.
2. 强调句:Obviously, it is __________ that _________.
3. 虚拟语气:It is high time that we should take concerted steps to _______________.
举例:
The following ways, from my perspective, can be adopted to address the problem. On the macro level, if the department of education can shoulder the responsibility and make relevant measures, the schools will pay more attention to teaching basic knowledge in the future. On the micro level, only by hard work can we form the bedrock of good performance in school.
注:写东西还是要有和题目关联的实质性内容,纯粹用模板显得有些空洞,认真研究例子,切记!
模块5:正反观点(展开经典3)
④There is much controversy over _______(议题). ⑤Some people argue that _____(正方观点)._______(展开阐述) ⑥Nevertheless, other people adopt a completely different view. They believe that ______(反方阐述). _____(展开阐述).
⑦Given the factors I have just outlined, it can be concluded that the question quite depends on personal choice. ______(个人观点).
第④句可以替换成:
1. ________ has given rise to a heated discussion.
2. _______has caused quite a stir among the general public.
3. As regards ______, there has been a heated discussion among the general public in our society.
4. Opinions vary when it comes to _________.
例如:There is much controversy over whether one should expect a reward after doing a good deed.
第⑤句替换:
argue可以换成maintain/hold/believe/suggest
第⑥句可以替换成:
However, those who strongly oppose are not among the minority. They hold that _____.
第⑦句可以替换成:
1. When considering opinions of both sides, I am inclined to be in favor of the former/latter one. (犀利观点)
2. When considering opinions of both sides, I find they are of the equal weight. (中庸观点)
3. ______ is just like a double-edged sword. We might as well avoid those undesirable effects, when making full use of it. (双刃剑)
或者直接写上自己的观点,用六脉神剑“独”这步。
例子:
There is much controversy over whether technology plays an indispensable role in school. Some argue that advanced technology has brought much convenience to students, while enriching the teaching methods in class. However, others adopt a completely different view. They believe technology can be used as an auxiliary tool for interactive teaching and learning, but one can never rely too much on it.
Given the factors I have just outlined, it can be concluded that the question quite depends on personal choice. However, to my knowledge, technology is something, but not everything. One should be very prudent in fully depending on technology.
附录:接下来我们来说说举例这回事。去年的六级考试谈“创新”,如果能准备一些例子,是非常有说服力的。但是四级“毕业就业读研”类就显得意义不大,举例是一种很好的方式使得文章有说服力(顺便cou zi)。
以下我们给出一些句型,大家可以灵活运用。
举例开头句:
(1) I can think of no better illustration of this idea than the following one.
(2) A case in point is that _____________________(句子).
(3) Numerous illustrations can be given, but this will suffice.
(4) For instance, __________________________.
(5) There are inspiring (好现象)/upsetting(坏现象) parallels today. _________(学霸版).
写实际事例:
自己准备一些万能的例子,如果写人类的精神,以下这个例子一般能用。
Take Steve Jobs, the Apple company founder, a great innovator, who strikes to the belief for his life time that __________comes before victory, for instance. Without it, he couldn’t have built Apple into an incredibly successful company with a string of successes no one else can rival. (括号里填上creativity,就成了另一个例子)
举例:
There is much controversy over the issue of whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. To my knowledge, online communication can replace the traditional way. Last year, I went to the US as an exchange student. I talked with my parents through skype and it was really convenient. We shared all the happiness and sadness on the internet and I could never forget that experience.
应用篇
提示:写作文就像造房子,你目前已经有了“模块”,你需要做的就是把这些“砖块”组合起来,有些砖块不匹配,你还需要稍微改动一下。根据题目,随机应变即可。
一般来说,有以下几种组合。
模块1+模块3+模块4(描图式)
模块1+模块5(描图式)
模块2+模块3+模块4(引言式)
开头+模块3+模块4(开放式)
看以下一些例子,我们一起来试试。
例文1:
For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should focus on the impact of social networking websites on reading. You are required to write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
“I love reading. I read about 3 hours a day.
My favorite book is Facebook*.”
*Facebook is the name of a social networking website.
分析(重点!):这是一篇描图类,题干要求我们写“社交网络对于阅读的影响”。
采用“模块1+模块5”的方法。
As we can see from the picture, two persons are discussing about reading. While to our amusement, the boy says his favorite book is Facebook. The picture seems to be humorous and ridiculous but thought-provoking on second thoughts, which intends to inform us that the social network has exerted an important impact on our daily reading.
Opinions vary when it comes to the impact of social networking websites on reading. Some people insist that social network provides them with large collections of information at a tremendous speed and stimulates their reading interest. On the contrary, other people claim that nowadays a host of youngsters pay so much attention to reading on social networks that they don’t have adequate opportunities or time to read traditional books.
There is no surprise that there are different opinions about the impact of social networking websites on reading. However, as a college student, I am convinced that it is necessary for us to read on social networking websites, but it is of greater necessity for us to read traditional books. We can never overly depend on social network. Only in this way can we become more educated and have a more bright future.
例文2:
For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay explaining why it is unwise to put all eggs in one basket. You can give explain to illustrate your point. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
分析(重点!):这是一篇引言类,题干要求我们写“社交网络对于阅读的影响”。
采用“模块2+模块4+总结”的方法。
Choosing a right strategy can exert a huge impact on our success. An English saying goes like this: Don’t put all your eggs in one basket. What it wants to reveal is that it is unwise to be totally dependent on one resource.
There are several reasons contributing to the correctness of this principle. To begin with, it is rather risky to put all the hope in one place. If one can have a contingency plan, it can deal with the unexpected when it comes to important event. What’s more, focusing on all the aspects at the same time contributes to a more balanced life. Suppose one would like to be admitted into a college. It is of vital importance for him to apply for several colleges. In this way, there is a better chance for him to be admitted.
Therefore, it is unadvisable to put everything on a single venture. Having a backup plan could help one lead a better life.
例文3:
For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the use of robots. Try to imagine what will happen when more and more robots take the place of human beings in industry as well as people‘s daily lives.
分析(重点!):这是一篇开放类,题干要求我们写“畅想未来”。
采用“开头+模块3+模块4”的方法。
开头段可以尝试使用天龙八部,模块3稍微改动下,模块4改动避免太模板化。
The development of technology has brought us unprecedented transformation, which is inevitable and undeniable. Robots, which are capable of exhibiting artificial intelligence, have emerged into our vision, and tend to play an increasingly important role in our life. For example, this year, Google’s Alphago beats Ke Jie, a master Go player, which causes quite a stir in the society. Consequently, there is much controversy over what will happen if robots replace human beings in the future.
When it comes to the influence of robots on human beings, there are a number of consequences. To begin with, we all come to a realization that one should be well equipped with advanced skills, such as art design or computer programming; otherwise they will become jobless, because robots will be more likely to take their roles. Furthermore, robots can assist human in a variety of ways. They can bring us much convenience and help to do dangerous work, such as coal mining. Also, robots, with their enormous computing ability, can provide accurate information for us, such as medical treatment.
Based on my personal experience, I can safely draw a conclusion that the robot is a double-edged sword. Whether it is a boon or a bane will be discussed for a number of years to come. However, one should make sensible use of technology, being a master rather than a slave of it.
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