【英语四级作文点评模板高中】大学英语四级大纲写作：教学与学习

Teaching and Learning

Directions: For this part，You are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic 3360 teaching and learning . You should write on less

1.教育和学习是教育的同一个过程。

但是教育和学习有时是分开的。

3.我们不能单纯依靠老师。

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Teaching and Learning

teaching and learning are parts of the same educational experience . while passing knowledge to 1 the students，A teacher is also learning . He learning

Unfortunately，teaching and learning are some times treated astwo separate things . in such a situation，The teacher is only regarded as

As a student，I think We shouldn ' t always count on13 teachers . listening to teachers in classroom is only part of The learning，The greater

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pass knowledge to:传授知识……。

精益论坛：从学习(知识)

above all:首先，最重要的是

gain experience from:是……。获得经验

on the part of:是的……。

each other supportive of each:相互支持

be sometimes treated as:有时……。

be only regarded as:只是……。

consider themselves solely as passive receivers:只把自己当成被动接受者

make an active use of:积极利用……。

11as a result:结果如下

十二八斗：太阳……。失败

13count on:依赖

14in the real sense:真正意义上

15what we are strong in:我们强大的一面，我们的优势

16 put what we have learned into practice:实践我们的知识

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这是根据汉语大纲写的三段议论文。这种题型作文经常出现在大学英语四级考试中。

全文由三个自然段落各收紧三点大纲逐步展开。而且这三段自然的开头文章都是各段的主题文。第一段首先说teaching and learning are parts of the same educational experience。接着老师和学生都表示，在教学过程中学习知识，培养智慧，双方可以相互支持。第二段以Unfortunately开头，暗示该段讲述了与前面所述相反的内容，然后写出了该段的主题文teaching and learning are some times treated as two separate things。以下是人们持有的另一种观点。老师指出了知识的传授者，学生只是知识的接受者，双方不能有效合作的错误结果。第三段讲述了作者本人作为学生应该有的态度和观点，并在很多阅读中指出了如何成为真正的学生。

参考文献：英语作文高分必须背丛书：《大学英语四级作文/梨花传》主编，武汉大学出版社，2005年。