【正确处理垃圾作文英语初中】第4级大纲写作：what can we do about the water pollution？

what can we do about the water pollution？

Directions : for this part，you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition entitled 3360 what can we do about the water pollution？the First sentence has been written for you : water pollution comes from many sources . your composition should be about 120 words(not inns fins)

1.水污染的主要原因

水污染的危险；

水污染问题的解决办法。

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what can we do about the water pollution？

water pollution comes from many sources . one major source is water products from various industries that are piped into 1 near by lakes or rivers R is oivers

water pollution is harm ful . industrial wastes have already many rivers lifeless . oil spill in the sea is killing enormous numbers of all Fish and

Obviously，water pollution has become a serious problem . what can we do about it in order to survive on earth？First，We must make great efforts to clean uppolluted water and limit further pollution of water . second，We must in sist that water pollution

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be piped into:被分配了

spill into流出；排放

巴尔格：平底货船、驳船

algae:海藻；海藻

what is more:还有；更是如此

typhoid:热病

cholera:霍乱

清洁：净化

trash:废物；垃圾

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本文是根据关于水污染的汉语大纲展开的三段议论文。全文共分为三段，每一段都是针对一个大纲展开的。首先，作者指出水源污染的原因是多方面的，并举例说明。在第二段中，作者首先指出水源污染有害，它不仅危害水生物，而且威胁人类健康，导致疾病的发生。在第三段中，作者指出了解决水污染的实用措施，如净化、立法、限制废物排放、自我保护等。在这一段中，作者使用了First、Second、Third、Finally等词，明确了句子水平，明确了语境。随笔的最后一句By Doingso，Wewill Beable to live a healthier and happier life指出了防止水污染的重要性，对全文进行了高度概括。

参考文献：英语作文高分必须背丛书：《大学英语四级作文/梨花传》主编，武汉大学出版社，2005年。