【80字英语作文高中申请信】加分数！为什么“英语思维逻辑”的理念之心写英语作文？

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优秀的大学考试英语原创作文范文是考生以英语思维梦寐以求的。只要英语思维优秀，英语作文就能优秀。其中：英语思维逻辑强，英语模板/板文不强！

所以：有“原因观点结果”的砖头才有“逻辑思维条文”的墙。有“逻辑思维集团”的树才有“逻辑思维段落/文章”的森林。

有了考生的英语思维逻辑，才会存在原创的英语写作范式。原创英语作文范文决定了考生英语作文的高分，高分的“幸福”指数来自“英语思维逻辑”的实践作文。

因此，英语写作要警惕“打败劣币的良币”的负面效果给考生高分。

这源于从“模板好”的声音中又听到警告的声音——发出的警告：要防止“写模板、写英语作文和文件：防止版权教师减分”。(威廉莎士比亚，模板，模板，模板，模板，模板)拒绝外国大学的留学推荐信”问题。因此，模板写作英语在“爱与恨交织”的时候，会导致学生英语写作能力“归零”的危险。虽然英语为母语的人用思维逻辑写英语具有强大的“灵魂生命力”。

国外用“逻辑思维写英语”，中国绝大多数学生(包括部分教师)在用“模板思维写英语”上有很大差异。这表明，中国大多数英语作文在实际实施/推进逻辑写作英语创新时仍然存在担忧，政策机构单薄，但力量不足等问题。

因此，目前“模板形式空前精细，模板教条空前”的英语写作以拆别人的板文英语为核心。——模板写作英语实施周期长度与学生的英语写作能力“归零危险”之间存在正比关系——。(威廉莎士比亚，模板，模板，模板，模板，模板，模板)

过去，英语写作中容易引发“打败劣币的良币”的负面效应，助长学生使用英语急躁短视的歪风，显然不利于英语写作的健康成熟发展。

英语是逻辑语言，不是模板语言，逻辑根据“英语写作的灵魂”的原则，不写英语，而是“暴力”，根据模板“快”、“重形式轻内容”，违反了英语写作原则和思想规律，因此不能保证英语写作的“生存率”，结果合理。

只有学习英语思维、逻辑写作的基本功过，英语写作分析问题的原因结果才能明确、质量水平高，才能摆脱“不说话就写，有单词就不知道怎么写”的烦恼。别说得这么高，更别说学生将来需要长期适应对外可能的各种交流和沟通合作。(莎士比亚)。

下面看英语思维逻辑写作和模板写作英语作文。两篇比较英语作文如下。

两篇英语作文题目都是“写一封想成为奥运会志愿者的申请书”

英语思维逻辑写作(获得24-25分)

Dear Officer from Olympic Game、

As a student、Li Hua from one of high schools、I would write you a letter applying to you for being one of volunteers doing voluntary-service

combining with the my knowledge acquired about sports，I will enabled to learn how to build up a harmonious and friendly relationship between peon

the voluntary service turns on charm for me in a sense in my dream to come true，remaining full of spirit with people held in great affection，in

tance, and with efforts made on performing my duty towards Olympic Game satisfactorily.

These well-doing ideas are to put into practice by means of doing the voluntary-service work excellently, which brings enjoyment to me in learning a lot from other’s volunteers whose well-behaved action gets me impressed excitedly. This encourages me to achieve an intellectual and spiritual growth in individual and social value, in my cooperation with others volunteers.

One, whose Olympic-game spirit together with its mission is set in mind, remains true with the original aspiration. That inspires me to be one of its excellent volunteers, who help make Olympic Game extremely great.

They let those in need feel it convenient, comfortable and warm to them to live in the Olympic Village by working hard at offering them service patiently, carefully and kindly in volunteers' time, knowledge and skills or talents, together with strong physics. These, as one of volunteers I am all really excellently proud of doing in the host country, China, where to tell viewers something about the true-glory greatness of its ancient history and of contemporary- and modern-culture civilization as human created genuinely.

The civilization is set in great hope and dream, I feel, which turns the host country favourable for becoming strongly intellectual and keeping highly intelligent to the Olympic Game.

As is seen from the above, I have outstanding ability and great potential to be one of very promising volunteer’s candidates. And the above service, as the useful or helpful one, will be expected to bring me to be one of volunteers in the Olympic game to come.

Your favorable consideration of my application for being one of Olympic-Game volunteers would be highly appreciated.

Yours Truly,

Li hua.

㈡模板写作英语作文（得17分）

Dear Mike,

I am more than delighted on hearing that you are recruiting new members for the voluntary work at the Olympic game, which drives me to write a letter in the hope that I may be chosen to field a job vacancy.

My advantages abound, one of which is my permanent oral English that enables me to communicate with foreignors （foreigners） both freely and fluently. An other related to my mastering a large amount of sports expertise so that I can introduce relevant information precisely. A third advantage lies in my outgoing and passionate personalities and it is this characteristic that makes me easily attract other’s attention.

I hold the firm belief that I, such a charismatic person, is the best candidate you are seeking. I would appreciate it as well as do my ulmost （utmost）to do the job if you could grant me a prompt reply regarding my the result.

Li hua

第二篇文出现模板词语很多，如：I am more than delighted on hearing that...；in the hope that...;My advantages abound...；An other related to...;a large amount of...;A third advantage...;it is this characteristic that...;I hold the firm belief that ...

以及用词不符英文习惯搭配如：you grant me a prompt reply regarding my the result而符合搭配的应是... you make or give me a prompt reply on whether I will be one of applicants or not.

总结：

与英语思维写作英语作文对比，“套模板、抄范文”的英语模板写作得低分，是很自然的了。

英语思维写作的英语作文有高度，有深度，有广度。如此发展了坚实的思维理论作为依据和方向，从而跨入理性思想发展写作有顽强的思想生命力。

因此从理论到实践理解了——便加分数！为何有一颗“英语思维逻辑”的理念之心 写作英语作文——之道理的真谛。