【第一次的英语初中作文作文】英语作文《开学第一天的感受》这样写

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亲爱的同学们，新学年开始了。认识了新学校、新班级、新老师、新伙伴，你肯定会有不同的感觉。如果要写一篇英语短文，叙述开学第一天的感觉，该怎么写？2

中学生适用：

"开学第一天的感觉"

[写作指导]

1.文章主题：

描述你在新学校看到和听到的东西，让大家分享你的快乐。

2.母片放置：

A.首先介绍学校的外观，然后具体叙述和描述某事或有某种特征的人。

B.用一两句话表达第一印象和感觉。

3.请造句：

A.习作应用第一人称和一般在现在进行叙述和描述。

B.除了使用be动词外，还学习使用like、look等简单的实义动词。

C.介绍学校时可用：my new school is.there is/are.in our school .

介绍人物时可用：She is/looks.

[例句]

我的第一天在学校

today is September 1st . it ' s the first day of a new term . I ' m very happy because I ' m a student in chengli middle school。

the school is very big and beautiful . there are so many teachers and students . they are very friendly . I ' m in class 2，Grade 7。miss Liu is our head teacher . she teaches us English . she looks very strict . in our first class she told us what we should do Anne

I like my class，teachers and my classmates。

[教师评论]

小作家在开学第一天用简单的语言叙述了自己对学校、老师、同学的印象，字里行间流露出自己的真心。作为七年级的学生，能写出这么完整、思路清晰的短文，真的很不错。例如，《There Are Somany Teachers and Students》中的There be句型是中学常用的，使用时要记住：There is单数名词或数不清的名词；There are复数名词。

另外，还利用了She teaches us English和She looks very strict等句子。句子的主语是第三人称单数she，所以句子的谓语动词也要使用第三人称单数形式。学生写文章一定要注意，千万不要粗心大意地忽略了这个用法。

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高中生适用：

“如何用英语描述开学第一天”

[写作地图]

一、沈帝正祖

本作文体裁主要用日记描述开学第一天看到的和感受的。写文章的时候要注意要点全面，水平明确。本文以陈述当天发生的事情为主，因此时态以一般的过去时间为主。人称以第一人称为主。

二、母片安排。

本作文的形式已经给出，只需写正文部分。

正文部分可分为三部分。

第一部分：描述校园环境。

第二部分：说明对老师和同学的印象。

第三部分：表达自己的感受。

三、组织语言

第一部分：校园环境说明

一般表示法：

when I went into the school，I found it so beautiful .

green trees and different kinds of flowers are here and there . our school seems like a big garden .

when I went into my school，I saw a tall teaching building . on the top of it our national flag was flying .

the air had the smell of flowers . it made me feel relaxed .

高级表示法：

entering through the school gate，I was amazed at its beautiful scenery .

with green trees and different kinds of flowers everywhere，our school looks like a big garden .

on stepping into my school，I saw a tall teaching building，on the top of which our nationa

l flag was flying.

◆ In front of it was a beautiful garden and the air was filled with the smell of flowers, which made me feel relaxed.

第二部分：描述你对老师和同学们的印象

普通表达：

◆ All my new teachers are kind and patient.

◆They use different teaching methods.

◆She used a new method of teaching. I had never experienced it before.

◆ All my classmates are friendly and hard-working.

◆I hope many of them will be my friends. / I hope to make many new friends.

高级表达：

◆Then I was happy to find that my new teachers were not only enthusiastic but also experienced.

◆Their teaching methods seemed new and effective.

◆I was attracted by her new method of teaching, which I had never experienced before.

◆All my classmates are friendly and brilliant.

◆I’m looking forward to making friends with them.

第三部分：表达自己的感受

普通表达：

◆I can’t forget my first day at Senior High school.

◆I think I’ll have happy high school days.

◆I will make progress here.

高级表达：

◆My first day at Senior High school made a deep impression on me.

◆I’m sure I’ll spend my high school days happily.

◆I believe with excellent teachers helping me, I will make great progress here.

普通范文

September 1st, Thursday Fine

Today is my first day at Senior High school. ①When I went into the school, I found it so beautiful. ②Green trees and different kinds of flowers are here and there. Our school seems like a big garden.

③All my new teachers are kind and patient. ④They use different teaching methods. At the first lesson, I felt nervous at first, but I was soon relaxed after our teacher asked us to introduce ourselves to each other. Besides, all my classmates are friendly and hard-working. ⑤I hope many of them will be my friends.

⑥I can't forget my first day at Senior High school. ⑦I think I'll have happy high school days.

高级范文

September 1st, Thursday Fine

Today is my first day at Senior High school. ①Entering through the school gate, I was amazed at its beautiful scenery. ②With green trees and different kinds of flowers everywhere, our school looks like a big garden.

③Then I was happy to find that my new teachers were not only enthusiastic but also experienced. ④Their teaching methods seemed new and effective. In the English class, Mr. Smith, our foreign teacher fromAmerica, told us about his interesting experiences inChina. Besides, all my classmates are friendly and brilliant. ⑤I'm looking forward to making friends with them.

⑥My first day at Senior High school made a deep impression on me. ⑦I'm sure I'll spend my high school days happily.

温馨提示：同学们，仔细阅读两篇文章之后，你会发现相同标号的内容采用了不同的表达方式来表达相同或相近的含义。因此，大家在平时的写作中，应该多使用一些复杂结构或高级词汇，同时，也应学会使用简单词汇或句式来表达复杂的意思。