【初中作文什么是评价】中考作文类型训练：介绍、评价与分析

中考作文类型训练：介绍、评价与分析

前言：广东省英语考试的作文问题与信息归纳问题的短文密切相关，在审议时准确界定写作对象和写作内容是书面表达获得高分的关键。另外，考场作文可以根据一定的框架写出完美的框架，使用高级句子，进一步提高句子分数。

2018年高中入学考试作文：

如果你是上面“共享小图”海报上的Bryan Lin，请在3个月的运营后给Todbol写封电子邮件，谈谈你对“共享小图”的感受。内容如下：

1简要介绍身份，说明写信意图。

2此类图书馆的优点(2分)；

3问“分享小画”存在的问题及其原因，以及建议。

标题分析：

写作大象：托德博尔，分享小画的创始人；

文章写作内容：个人信息介绍、分享小图评价、分享小图的问题和原因分析、征求建议。

评价分享小图的提示：分享小图是小区项目，其优点可以从改善邻里关系和改善人们的生活方式两个方面考虑。

参考范文： (请重点记住划线的句子)

Dear Todd，

I hope this email finds you well . I am Bryan Lin，the director of the little free library in sunshine park community . I am writing to tell you

In my opinion，this little free library has two advantages . first，It can help our neighbors form closer friendships with each other by exchantages . first

However，as time goes by，the books in the library get fewer and fewer because some people just take books but don ' t leave books . I wons

I am looking forward to your reply。

Best regards，

布莱恩利姆

相同类型的主题写作练习：社区主题、评价、分析

主题：时代银行：时代银行

几年前，“时间银行”还是新的，现在在很多地方很受欢迎。假设你的社区也会努力推进这个项目，请就此写一篇短文，谈谈你的看法。其内容如下：

1你在的地方有“时间银行”吗？

2你认为这个项目的优点是什么？(两点)

3你想参加这个项目吗如果你愿意，请谈谈你的技术和需要。不想的话就谈谈你的理由。

标题分析：

写作大象：这篇文章属于个人分享观点，没有特定的阅读对象。

写作内容：有时间银行吗？时间银行评价、是否加入时间银行以及理由。

关于评价时间银行的提示：时间银行是一个社区项目，可以从改善邻里关系和改善人们的生活方式两个方面考虑优点。

参考范文： (请重点记住划线的句子)

Time Bank was invented in 1980 by an American professor of law . we haven ' t carried out(展开，实施)Time Bank in our community yet。

In my opinion，this project has two advantages . first，It can encourage our neighbors to do more volunter work in their free time . ST It can hellunter

Since(后)timebank is such a great project，I would like to join it very much . I am good at English and I c

an take care of pets. In exchange(交换), I hope someone can help me with my math homework and repair my bike.

I am looking forward to having this project in my community.

同类型作文拓展练习：假设你是一个参与者，评价、分析

1）无人零售店：the self-service retail station

假如你是上文"无人零售店"中的使用者Ms Xia，经过三个月的使用后，请你写封邮件给无人零售店的运营者，谈谈你对无人零售店使用的感受，内容包括：

1 简单介绍你的身份，并说明写信意图；

2 这种无人零售店的好处（两到三点）；

3 无人零售店存在的问题及其原因，并询问建议。

参考范文：

Dear Sir,

I hope this email finds you well. I am Mrs Xia. I work in an office in Wuxi, Jiangsu Province. I often buy snacks and drinks from your self-service retail stations. Now I am writing to tell you my opinions about this kind of stations.

In my opinion, the self-service retail station has three advantages. First, it saves our time because we can get food without leaving the floor. Second, it saves our money because the prices of food in the stations are lower than those in most other stores. Third, it provides us more chances to know more people while buying food.

However, although I don't want to believe, some people steal(偷) food and drinks from the station because nobody else is there to stop them. I wonder if you can give me some advice to deal with this problem.

I am looking forward to your reply.

Best regards,

Ms Xia

2 NBA球星勒布朗.詹姆斯在2018年创办了I Promise School(IPS), 致力于帮助问题少年重返校园和健康成长。

假设你是上文中的Sammy Turner, 即将完成在IPS的初中学业。请你给LeBron James写一封邮件，谈谈你在该校读书的感想，内容包括：

1 表达对LeBron的感激之情和原因；

2 你在IPS读书的收获（三点）；

3 你打算将来如何传播这种爱心。

参考范文：

Dear Mr. James,

I am Sammy Turner, a student at IPS. I want to say "thank you" to you. Because of you and IPS, I had the chance to go back to school and I have become a better person.

Since I studied at IPS, I have learned a lot. First, I have learned a lot of knowledge and make progress in study. Second, I always feel loved and important here and I have learned to help others. Third, with the help of IPS, I can face my problems bravely and deal with them in the right way.

In the future, I will never forget that I am a member of IPS. I will try my best to help more people in need. I wish the world could be a place full of love.

Best regards,

Sammy Turner