再现真题(2017年全国卷一)

假设你是李华,你的英国朋友莱斯利正在学汉语。请写一封电子邮件告诉我下节课的计划。内容如下:

1.时间和地点

内容:学习唐诗。

课前准备:对唐代历史的简要了解。

注意:

1.字数100左右;

2.为了句子一致,可以适当地添加细节。

故障排除步骤

第一步:仔细审查问题。

1.审问体:这是半公开的书面表达,要求一封电子邮件,属于应用文。题目以李华的名义,要求英国朋友Leslie写一封电子邮件,告知下次汉语课的时间、地点、内容以及需要准备的准备。

2.评委:根据题目要求,可以看出这篇文章以第一人称和第二人称为主。

3.时态:课文的主要内容是下节课的计划和准备以及必要的准备工作,所以时态以一般未来时间为主。

4.审议内容:根据题目要求适当扩大,可以提取五个要点,逐一展开。重点是:

(1)信的目的:把下节课的信息告诉对方。

(2)上课时间和地点:下周五上午10:00,教学楼第8教室。

(3)课程内容:学习唐诗。

(4)课前准备:了解唐朝的历史。

(5)结论:期待答复。

第二阶段:结构决定

根据要点提示,本文可分为三段。第一段:说明信的目的。第2段:请告诉对方下次汉语课的时间、地点、内容和必要的准备。第三段:期待快速答复。

第三步:根据要点列出适当的表达。

1 . I ' m writing to tell you about the course schedule of our next class,which is about poetry of the Tang dynasty .

2.to start with,what I intend to stress is that we will have it in classroom 8 of the teaching building at 10a . m . next Friday .

3.it ' s of great importance for you to read some materials about poetry of the Tang dynasty .

4.you ' d better know about the history of the Tang dynasty in advance,which will help make the class go smoothly .

5.I hope you can reply to my letter early。

范文鉴赏

Dear Leslie,

how is everything going along with you?I ' m writing to tell you about the course schedule of our next class,which is about poetry of the Tang dynasty .

To start with,what I intend to stress is that we will have it in classroom 8 of the teaching building at 10a . m . next Friday . what ';it ' s of great importance for You to read some materials about poetry of the Tang dynasty . besides,You ' d better know about the history of the the the

I hope you can reply to my letter early。

Yours,

李华

[评论]

这篇范文的主题明确,要点完整,思路清晰。句子语言标准,地道,意思流畅连贯,表达优美,句子转换多样。

短文中使用的高级词汇有intend to、in advance、smoothly等。用名词性子句what I intend to stress作为主语,起到了强调的作用。It's of great importance使用It作为形式主语。在Which is about poetry of the Tang dynasty和which will help make the class go smoothly中,which将指导您完成非限制性属性部分。To start with、what's more、besides等连接词的使用使句子流更加流畅。

总之,整篇文章段落清晰,表达准确,是优秀的范文。

得到高分作文的要素

1.内容符合主题。也就是说,严格按照题目规定的要求写作。

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2. 表达清楚,即观点鲜明,内容积极向上,意思完整,论证充分,首尾呼应;

3. 语意连贯,即文字通顺,衔接自然,文章思路清晰;

4. 句式多样,即语句灵活多变,自然得体;

5. 表述正确,即句子结构和用词无错误;

6. 卷面整洁,即书写规范,美观大方。

写作技巧点拨

(一) 应用文写作指导

应用文是人们日常生活中广泛使用的文体。它最突出的特点是它的实用性,常用的应用文包括书信、通知、日记、海报、便条、启事、发言稿等。应用文写作应该注意以下几点:

1. 语言要规范、准确、简洁,句子不宜过长。

2. 根据不同的文体采用不同的人称和时态,如日记采用第一人称,且多用一般过去时;通知多采用将来时和一般现在时,书面通知多使用第三人称。

3. 准确把握格式,不同的应用文要采用不同的格式,如通知一般包括三部分,即标题、正文和落款。

4. 不同的应用文都有一些特定的习惯表达,考生应该熟练掌握。常见的表达如下:

  • (1) I’m glad/delighted that I have received your letter.
  • (2) It is / has been … since …
  • (3) Learning from … that …, I would like to …
  • (4) How are you getting on/along with …?
  • (5) I received your letter on …, in which you told me …
  • (6) If you need help, please don’t hesitate to let me know.
  • (7) I’m looking forward to your early reply.
  • (8) I would appreciate it if …
  • (9) Best regards/wishes to you.
  • (10) I hope that you’ll have fun / enjoy yourself / have a wonderful time.

(二) 提纲类写作指导

提纲类书面表达是近几年高考英语书面表达的常见题型。命题者通常把提纲作文与其他常用文体形式(如书信、新闻报道、通知、日记、发言稿等)有机结合在一起进行考查。

1. 提纲类作文对考生思路和文章写作范围做了明确限定,它把要求的情景和内容分成块,以条目的形式列出,要求考生据此进行写作。行文时,试题要求中所列举的要点要全部涉及到。

2. 提纲类书面表达具有一定的灵活性,为了提高文章档次,考生应在保证内容要点齐全的同时进行合理而又紧扣主题的发挥。

3.提纲类作文的写作步骤一般分为:审题,确定写作中心,明确文体形式、人称及主要时态,并合理分段;构思,根据提纲全面构思文章内容,列出要点,构思词语和句型结构,并确定写作顺序,要注意详略得当,重点突出;写作完稿,根据要点及构思的词语和句型结构,连句成文。

常用句型:

(1) 祈使句:Please allow me to tell you something before you read this book.

(2) 感叹句:What beautiful flowers they are!

How delicious these cakes are!

(3) 倒装句:Only in this way can he grow to be a useful man.

(4) it作形式主语或宾语:It is no use trying to argue with him.

I would appreciate it if you could come to my birthday party.

(5) 并列句:You are a good student and we should believe in you.

(6) 强调句:It was Mr. Wang that saved the drowning boy.

(7) 非谓语动词短语:We wasted a whole afternoon trying to repair the car.

(8) with+复合宾语:A terrible accident happened

yesterday, with nine people killed and eighty injured.

(9) there be句型:There is going to be a basketball

match between Class 1 and Class 2 tomorrow.

(10) 定语从句:Those who study there are mostly disabled children.

(11) 状语从句:I’ll write to you when I hear from her.

(12) 名词性从句:I admitted that I had been wrong.

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