【高中作文对比】上海中考英语145分作文低级A篇：责任的重要性。

上海中考英语145(助力高中)免费帮助上海学生高考英语145分以上，重点突破并实现以下目标：

1.据说考试达到了满分。

2.a文件写18分以上

3.听力语法词汇阅读在减分2分以内

4.奠定高中四大题型的基础(翻译和写摘要、填语法空格、填词汇空格、填空格)

提示：

(1)上海高中入学考试听说考试从2023年开始从现在的10分增加到15-20分，筛选学生的意图更加明显。

(2)上海中学英语将从2023年开始修订，目前用了近20年的牛津教材将成为历史，高中教材将在2020年经过选版，对学生能力的要求进一步提高。

从今天开始修改基础薄弱的初三学生的作文(坐标：杨浦区内最底层的学校之一，位置：100-110)

只有同辈的作文才能给人留下深刻的印象。只有把原文和我的修改本进行比较，才能知道写作的道路。请珍惜最干燥的商品！

Take职责is important

修改前：

take respons ibility is important . my grand father had a serious illness last year . it ' s a difficult time for my family . one day my gray Ng after my grapter.Ed to clean the room by myself.first，clean my room and my desk . It cost me about fifteen minutes . next，It took me twenty minutes to swept the flept

修改后

Lastyear，my grand father was badly ill and had to stay in hospital for several weeks . it was a difficult time for my family because my mother。Who did all the housework，was looking after my grand father in The hospital . after a few days，The floor became dirty and all The rooms were in a I knew taking care of a family is not easy . I was big enough to do something for it . when my mother came back and saw that，She was very proud of having such