【大学实现目标英语作文初中】《大学英语四级命题作文》Target Is Important

target is important

Directions: For this part，You are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic : target is important . You should write at least

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Target Is Important

Many times，when I walk on the campus road or talk with some of my old schoolmates on the telephone，I often hear they say " I ' m very depressthey are complaining that their life is blank and meaningless .

this kind of mentalityis quite common among university students，especially the freshmen . when we were senior middle school students，We we find out that our dreams do not come true，what should we do next，Wedon't know.we，like a small boat lost in the vast sea，don't in addition，There ' s always a great distance between idealand reality . after We come to the university，We find out that all the things iidealwe are filled with dis appointment instead of excitement .

Alexandre Dumas pere、a famous French writer、said“living without an aim is like sailing without compass”life is short、OS We have no time to depress、disappoint or complain . We should find out our coordinate and set up a new target as soon as possible

(李文历史文化学院2003级)

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mentality:思维习惯

ideal: adj .理想

ideal: n .以上

动态：动态；充满活力的

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这篇文章是根据命题展开的议论文。全文围绕着名为“人要有目标”的中心展开。

文章首先指出了目前普遍存在的客观现象。绝大多数大学生，特别是大一的学生，都感到精神空虚。在第二段中，作者运用比较法分析了中学生和大学生不同的精神世界，并将其归纳为WE(University Students)Are Filled With DIS Appointment Instead of Excitement。在第三段中，作者引用名人名言指出了伟大的真理，并建议大家要制定远大的目标。最后的结局Where there is the target，there is the dynamic force不仅具有强大的号召力，而且还富有修辞美。

资料来源：李华传主编《四级写作》，新大英语4、6考点透视丛书/李华传主编，武汉大学出版社，2006年。