【英语四级作文点评模板高中】第四阶段情景提示写作：fast economic growth-gains or losses？

第四阶段情景提示写作：fast economic growth-gains or losses？

Direction : for this part，You ' re allowed thirty minutes to write a composition entitled " fast economic growth-gains or

经济的快速发展历来是发展中国家的人们期待和做的。然而，这种发展态势在给人们带来利益的同时也带来了很多问题。请就这个问题发表自己的意见。

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fast economic growth-gains or losses？

there is much discussion today about whether fast economic growth is desirable . and people ' s views on it are varied。

those who criticize economic growth Argue that we must slow down . they believe that our society is approachingcertain limits on growth . they The Fifi

there is certainly some truth on both sides，yet neither provides a satis factory answer。to my mind，Economic growth should meet the needs of the present without compromisingthe ability of future generations to meet their own needsin China，Both the economic development and the protection of natural resources need granting equal priority to。as such is the case，sustainable development

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approach:接近；接近

修改：固定

工业化：工业化

compromise:妥协；危害损失

马罗：骨髓；要点；要点。精华

可持续发展：可持续发展

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这篇文章是根据情景提示展开的三段议论文。全文围绕着经济快速发展的利弊展开。

第一段是总论，指出人们对这个中心问题的意见各不相同，仁者见仁，智者见智。第二段简述正反两方面两个完全对立的观点，对他们分别进行论证，两方面的论证都比较短，但击中要害，使读者不一致，无法下定决心。(威廉莎士比亚，温斯顿，著)然后作者在第三段通过Thereis Certain Some Truth on Both Sides，Yet Neither Provides A Satisfactory Answer顺利过渡，引出了作者自己的观点3354经济发展。

专业脉络清晰，层次分明，总分-总的结构有助于读者理解。观点鲜明，有道理，有根据，道理透彻，最终结论更加切中要害，不仅反映了作家有较好的英语语言功底，也反映了作家有较广泛的社会知识。

参考文献：英语作文高分必须背丛书：《大学英语四级作文/梨花传》主编，武汉大学出版社，2005年。